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doragon-hane [2012-02-10 10:12:43 +0000 UTC]

well conisdering you wanted me to critique you i shall! be warned though! i will be harsh!

first, why are his legs so stubby?? I know he's a chibi and all but his legs look like tree stumps. his wrists are bending at an angle that im sure as hell isnt possible unless your wrists are broken and his torso looks a tad to long. His wings remind me of fins. and the feathered one looks more like spikes than anything. feathers generally tend to be rounder at the tip and it looks like they have no bones in the wing, it's all connected to his back and looks much too stiff for flight, at best i think he could only glide.

I dont see anything wrong with the face but his eyes dont seem to fit the picture (as in they dont seem to have the right shape for his expression)

if you want i can sketch my own version of him for you as i tend to think seeing instead of reading helps the learning process.


TOLD you i'd be harsh XD

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jos-i [2011-12-18 09:16:49 +0000 UTC]

here that looks awesome great work.

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