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Published: 2009-05-22 21:11:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 490; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description first off, i know its really really really bad, and i agree that it is :)
MUSICDED VERSION HEAR....[link]
so basically this is what ive been working on for the past 3 months for 1 and a half hours a day.
it was a paaaaain
OH AND THIS IS FOR HAPPY GRADUATION D<
constructive criticism is allowed, but please note i didnt have too much time so i probably already know =3=
you can question cause i know its confusing
COMPLAINTS ARE NOT ALLOWED if you have a complaint, please read the first note and reconsider, if not, i will claim you cannot read
the style was inspired by the riddle by the heroine, because nikki told me to
the song is the riddle.

edit: huh, i was thinking more people would be confused with the plotline. oh well.
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Comments: 21

machinemalfunction [2009-05-23 14:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Great plot! Very interesting.
You have a good drawing style too. It would look great if the strokes were a tad cleaner and you used something other than the black brush tool.

Some advice. When you animate frame by frame, use the onion skin tool and the F7 key instead of the F6 key and the eraser. REDRAW the drawing each frame, changing a little, instead of copying it and rubbing out the bits you want to change. That'll make it much more visually appealing. Next you should put in some colors and better backgrounds and you'll have Disney quality animations
I do realize that you didn't have much time though.
Oh, and use a different font :3

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choco98 In reply to machinemalfunction [2009-05-23 22:44:40 +0000 UTC]

yea i was using the onion skin tool, and well i got lazy and decided to juts modify the exsisting frames.

and the fact that if i tried to redraw frames like that things would shift around alot. swords would accidently become daggers somehow.

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machinemalfunction In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 00:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Ahh well resizing and stuff comes with practice. I'm sure you'll get there.

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choco98 In reply to machinemalfunction [2009-05-24 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]

EVENTUALLY.

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machinemalfunction In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 10:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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ManaKing190 [2009-05-22 21:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol animation is lol. WIIIINNNNNN.

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-22 22:08:02 +0000 UTC]

WUT NU IT BAD.

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ManaKing190 In reply to choco98 [2009-05-23 01:17:59 +0000 UTC]

AT LEAST U CAN O3O

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-23 01:58:30 +0000 UTC]

RARW. YOU CAN, ES EASY, BUT PAAAAAINFUL

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ManaKing190 In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 13:30:25 +0000 UTC]

BLAH. I DUN LIEK PAIN.

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-24 13:49:46 +0000 UTC]

THEN DUN DO IT?

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ManaKing190 In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 14:24:47 +0000 UTC]

IDUNKNU

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-24 17:13:14 +0000 UTC]

OR DEW YEW?

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ManaKing190 In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 17:14:54 +0000 UTC]

MAAAAAAAAYBE

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-24 19:00:12 +0000 UTC]

COUUUULLLLLD BE

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ManaKing190 In reply to choco98 [2009-05-24 20:59:26 +0000 UTC]

PERHAAAAAAPS

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choco98 In reply to ManaKing190 [2009-05-24 22:40:22 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAALLLLLMOST

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cerathe [2009-05-22 21:18:34 +0000 UTC]

holy shizz, LXZ - this is some great animation! O:

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choco98 In reply to cerathe [2009-05-22 22:08:24 +0000 UTC]

not rrreeeaaaalllyyy

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cerathe In reply to choco98 [2009-05-23 13:55:55 +0000 UTC]

are you kidding me? Sure, it's not professional quality - but it's still really good! ¯3¯

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choco98 In reply to cerathe [2009-05-23 22:41:51 +0000 UTC]

owell then clrz.

it was still a pain though.

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