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Chococat05 — A Hopeless Wreck
Published: 2004-08-08 03:26:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description           Heart beats
          shifting feet,
          twiddling thumbs
          smacking gum,
          tongue all tangled
          hair feels mangled,
          breathing quickens
          stomach sickens,
          buckling knees
          silent pleas,
          head spins
          and whirlwinds.
     All the while my teeth chatter
        and you ask 'what's the matter'?
     I wanna say the absolute truth,
        but that would be completely uncouth.
     I would also shout and scream,
        but that would cause a real big scene.
     I wanna confess my crush on you,
        but I can't predict what you'd do.
     So when you ask the second time,
        I simply state, 'nuthin, I'm fine'.
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Comments: 2

Sanity-Infected [2004-08-15 17:49:34 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like she's about to barf. Neat word choice, nice job.

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Chococat05 In reply to Sanity-Infected [2004-08-15 19:11:52 +0000 UTC]

lol, yea i guess u could say she was about to do that, too.
thanks!

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