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ChrisIsForReal — Lock And Key
Published: 2010-10-08 17:48:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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You apologised said it's not what I'd want to hearBut can I stop you there
I'd be lying if I said I never saw this coming
You say don't leave me
But I had no plans of running
'Cause I'm feeling the same thing too
The hearts beat is the hardest code to crack
The last part to find it's voice
You ask why I fell in love,
Like I ever had a choice?
You bring out the best, make me stronger
Make me wish that life lasts longer
Call it greed,
'Cause forever with you, doesn't sound long enough to me
I'll sit, and I'll wait
As long as, it takes
Cause you're worth the time,
I took to ignore the signs.
Is this what you really wanted, cause I can tell you
I couldn't be more sure
So open up that one last door
I can see it in the distance
But that's not a problem anymore
And when the lights go out,
Feelings all get left behind
You're the one I hope I find
I have to find you
I have to hold you
If I can't see you, I have to feel you
Cause a second without you is a lifetime I can't bear
I'll sit, and I'll wait
As long as, it takes
Cause you're worth the time,
I took to ignore the signs.
Is this what you really wanted, cause I can tell you
I couldn't be more sure
So open up that one last door
I can see it in the distance
But that's not a problem anymore
Waiting for one chance, just you and me alone
And it was never, meant to be easy
Cause there're so many walls between you and me
They say it could never happen
We know it has to happen
Time's passing us so fast
But I believe we could make this last
I'll sit, and I'll wait
As long as, it takes
Cause you're worth the time,
I took to ignore the signs.
Is this what you really wanted, cause I can tell you
I couldn't be more sure
So open up that one last door
I can see it in the distance
But that's not a problem anymore
All I really wan't is, no all I really need is
A chance to show what we could be
Cause this could be the great romance
All we ask is just one chance
We'll prove to you, nothing can ruin love
When she's the one you're afraid to lose
And so I have one chance,
To make my mark, ignite a spark
Show you the way we're taking
Cause the time apart has me breaking apart
I'll sit, and I'll wait
As long as, it takes
Cause you're worth the time,
I took to ignore the signs.
Is this what you really wanted, cause I can tell you
I couldn't be more sure
So open up that one last door
I can see it in the distance
But that's not a problem anymore
It's not such a problem anymore
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Comments: 4
I find repetition of lines and words tricking to work with. Timing counts, and the placement matters. Repeating lines and words can give it that push to make it even greater or push it back a step. And I am a fan of repetitious writing style.
I think it made this even greater. It holds quite a lot of hidden emotion, which makes it even more compelling.
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they really are hard to work with, they could backfire at any time xD
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Indeed, but that's what makes them even more lovely and addicting to work with!!
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Interesting...
I like the straight-forwardness of this piece, although it's pretty clear that there's a great deal of emotion behind the words. The repetition emphasises the subject matter more and the flow isn't too bad, either.
The phrasing could be better, perhaps... but eh.
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