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Okay so I submitted this picture a few days ago but it seemed weird like something was missing so I made some major revisions. First the hair I decided to go all black and added some eyeliner to make him look darker and to bring out his eye color then I made his jacket more detailed I thought it looked to plain and I made his other shirt black to really contrast the red background. I think this one turned out well too. Maybe you could tell me which one is better this one or the old one?

Description
Okay so I submitted this picture a few days ago but it seemed weird like something was missing so I made some major revisions. First the hair I decided to go all black and added some eyeliner to make him look darker and to bring out his eye color then I made his jacket more detailed I thought it looked to plain and I made his other shirt black to really contrast the red background. I think this one turned out well too. Maybe you could tell me which one is better this one or the old one?