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ClamShellHeart — Never Force A Rhyme
Published: 2008-08-08 22:26:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Forcing smiles
From time to time
Forcing love
Just ain’t right
Forcing food
Can be polite
But when you’re writing a poem
Never force a rhyme

It’s like taking feelings
And fitting them into a mold
It’s like messing up what someone said
And calling it a quote
And though most good poems
Need some flow
They don’t all need a rhyme

The message is good
And vocab. is swell
It flow’s alright
But the wording it off
And there’s nothing wrong with rhyme
When it’s placed right
But here it is forced
It’s out of time

And when you’re wrighting
Never force a rhyme
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Comments: 2

zukamorix [2008-08-08 22:28:28 +0000 UTC]

damn!! i totally agree with what you said

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ClamShellHeart In reply to zukamorix [2008-08-08 22:29:50 +0000 UTC]

x3 Thank you very much-- for the fave as well <3

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