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#comic #worldcrisis #thanks
Published: 2017-06-12 19:38:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 319; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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*its just changed alot and seems very dry and barrenOK!!! THE FIRST PAGE OF WORLD CRISIS IS OUT!!!!!!
Next: I update whenever OwO
THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO HELPED AND IS PART OF THE OFFICIAL WORLD CRISIS TEAM!!!
Smolbritishbrat <--- owns characters also my first recruit
Owl-Mom <--- owns character and is very inspiring
Space--Nerd <--- Owns Character and helped alot with how i make my characters original and relatable
Hifeod <--- Pushed me to work and helped on the first page
MonStarCutie <--- Owns characters and made alot of species for me
RamenKinq <--- Owns character and was really hyped to join
1c3Cr3amQu33n <---Owns character and helped with species concepts
Brimstoneabyss <--- Pushed me to work and helped me ink some of my sketchbook
KingVicturi <--- Pushed me and helped give some neatoo critique
aerial1997 <---this one is not really part of the team they just helped with a really nice concept and kept puching me to make this
~~~THANK YOU!!!!!!~~~
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Comments: 5
Nero-bero-zero [2017-06-14 09:21:17 +0000 UTC]
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The comic so far is a good start. Visuals are ok but as a suggestion crop the images or center the characters. That way there isn't as much emptiness. The text is readable and lovely handwriting. Export the title image to be less blurry. Add more shading to the environment as well as the characters. oh, shoot I still have characters left so uh its a good start and there is still room for improvement. Great job though got to hand it to you. I wonder where the story picks up after this. Well, this has been stefonokevin123 writing a review.
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ClassiTheGoat In reply to Nero-bero-zero [2017-06-14 18:45:09 +0000 UTC]
Haha!! thanks for the crit!! It really helps me to see that you can find how i can improve!!
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