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Published: 2005-10-31 19:31:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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And as I tried to reach out to you, tried to grab hold of you my star, the pointed edges ripped open my hand, bleeding as I fell. Can't you see we fell faster than we ran, slipped on each cloud and fell back to the ground. Every time I fell and reached for you, you flew higher, closer to the sun as it haloed you, melting my wings as I drifted out of sight.So now I watch you fly, like a bird, talented as you drift over the breeze, over the troubles, never looking down at me, never even noticing me as I struggle through to try and reach you, desperately trying to fly. I look down at my hand, thinking of the time I had you in my arms, yet my weak humanity made me let go of the best thing I ever held.
Cursing I cut off my hand, hardly being able to bear staring at the scar any longer, not being able to see how close I once was to you. And as I look at the blood, I realise how stupid I've been, no longer able to think I lay down, feeling a bit closer to you than I've ever been. Feeling suddenly like I'm further from you than I will ever be again.
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Comments: 17
i-am-wombat [2005-11-16 23:27:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow thats good i havnt been here for ages but i have nothing to post these days too busy with school work to write poetry
kinda sux
but this gives off a strong message of what ussually happens when u break up with someone, you realise you liked them even more than you thought you did and dont miss them till their gone
-=:WombaT:=-
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rastill [2005-11-08 04:23:53 +0000 UTC]
Sums up alot of the way I feel when my muse leaves me high and dry.
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rastill In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-11-09 03:14:01 +0000 UTC]
muse = the source of artistic inspiration.
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rastill In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-11-12 00:18:58 +0000 UTC]
yea, don't know where my came from or where it goes..a fickle think the muse.
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andycyca [2005-11-01 15:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good! This is a great example of how fast inspiration can pass...
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JadedIceStorm [2005-11-01 04:34:39 +0000 UTC]
That is really pretty. I really like this a lot
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to JadedIceStorm [2005-11-01 17:43:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much
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