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clinicallybeyondhelp β€” Love Me
Published: 2005-08-09 18:54:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 8
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His sweaty hands wrapped around the bears head roughly as he held it behind his back, he approached the door nervously. The sound of the bell made him jump, interrupting his own world wrapped up by words. She came to the door as a vision of beauty, childishly he stood there in awe forgetting completely about the stuffed toy, and suddenly he jolted it out in front of her.

She took one look at the cute mammal hugging a heart and wrapped her arms around his neck, passionately kissing him. Carefully avoiding her with his clammy hands, he kissed her back, allowing his nerves to flow away through her mouth.

Everyday, she picked up the bear, hugging it before leaving the house. It sat proudly on the side in her kitchen, and as the relationship went further the bear grew more proud, more important to her. Eventually he moved in, smiling every time he past the small bear sitting upon the side.

One night he came home with the scent of another woman flowing off him like the foul stench of fermented apples. The pain as he admitted it to her was unbearable, she picked up the bear, threw it against the ground and walked him out of her house.

As soon as she’d shut the door, she ran to the couch crying, leaving the bear laying there, crying,

β€œLove me."

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Comments: 9

Who-Is-Chill [2005-08-15 11:32:08 +0000 UTC]

You know how to use the emotion in your proses. It gives emotion. It's really good lady.

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rastill [2005-08-12 17:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Another great one, such intensity.

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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to rastill [2005-08-12 17:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Thanks soo much for all the comments.
~X~

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rastill In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-08-12 17:58:16 +0000 UTC]

anytime, thank you for sharing your wonderful work

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ahrimarneus [2005-08-12 16:47:04 +0000 UTC]

awwwww baybee... that was such a beautiful story - for such a beatiful picture.


*hug*


I like this one very much, well done

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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to ahrimarneus [2005-08-12 17:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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angeleyes79 [2005-08-09 20:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I think you did a wonderful job on this one! Beautiful idea, yet such a sad story. I love strong emotions....they are pure, strong and sometimes difficult to handle!

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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to angeleyes79 [2005-08-09 20:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Aided by such a beautiful picture.
~x~

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thegreatmizuti [2005-08-09 19:17:02 +0000 UTC]

brilliant love it i feel for the bear FAVE!!

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