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Published: 2005-08-10 13:22:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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Kathy gazed out from her porcelain prison, as she did everyday since she had been trapped there; sorrow filled her eyes as she watched people pass. Occasionally they commented on the realism of the eyes and she saw they knew, she’d scream at them, no noise erupting from the pursed pink lips. But eventually the effect of her eyes wore off on them and they walked on by, leaving her on her own.The nights were the worst, her hope would fade with the light as she realised she would have to spend another night scared and alone. She had tried to push herself off the hook on the wall, to smash on the forgiving ground, but she couldn’t, she was trapped.
The light would stream through the shutters, awakening her from the small amount of rest she had managed to get. The glass doors would open and people came flooding in, the normal bustle as they walked past her, occasionally stopping to look. That’s when the shoulder approached her, smash, she fell to the ground. Relief flooded through her, then she realised this was it, no release, no more chances. Silently she cried out.
rescue me
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Comments: 14
Who-Is-Chill [2005-08-15 11:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Emotion, emotion. I like this in your texts, its really pretty and nice.
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to Who-Is-Chill [2005-08-15 15:53:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
~x~
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rastill [2005-08-12 18:10:03 +0000 UTC]
alot of things to comptemplate on this one, excellent work yet again
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to rastill [2005-08-12 18:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Get contemplating
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rastill In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-08-12 19:52:20 +0000 UTC]
What she thought was her prison was not, she sought freedom in the wrong form and trapped herself further. very deep.
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to rastill [2005-08-12 21:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Yay. Wow. Just Wow.
Thank you.
~x~
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ahrimarneus [2005-08-12 16:40:26 +0000 UTC]
awwwww hunni thats sooo deeply and beautifully sad... soo emotionally vivid
I like it, very nice piece hun.
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nighthawkpm [2005-08-10 22:10:12 +0000 UTC]
a good work - soory I do not read more of your works! I have a question - who was it that trapped her or was it her self?
Kevin
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to nighthawkpm [2005-08-11 08:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Well read and I believe you can figure that out yourself. Thank you very much.
~x~
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thegreatmizuti [2005-08-10 13:44:15 +0000 UTC]
wow very very emotinal i really like this like all your work fave
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to thegreatmizuti [2005-08-10 13:55:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol.. thanx.
~x~
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thegreatmizuti In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-08-10 14:57:37 +0000 UTC]
no problem love
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