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Published: 2005-08-21 17:27:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Tom grinned broadly; he remembered this place so distinctly. There where women here, you could get no where else. They were permanently in competition with each other to be “top dog”, becoming more outrageous and exciting each time.

He saw the details on each dancer, happily noting that many were the same as his last visit. He noticed one lying across a table and decided that was were he was to start his evening.

Seeing a lot of men with their hands pleasuring themselves to the rhythm of the dancer doing do to herself, Tom chuckled and decided to fit in. For a second his mind began counting the amount of money that would be made in fines due to the illegality of jacking off in public, but he quickly shook the thought away.

He was entranced by the fluid movements of the dancer’s rippling body. He glanced around; eager to get the best evening possible, when he saw an empty stage. Curious he moved towards the small notice pinned to the wood panelling, it was an untidy scrawl which he struggled to decipher. He murmured, slowly realising that just a fortnight ago he was here during the day investigating a murder. His mind became focused on finding the murder, as he rushed out of the sleazy bar.

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Comments: 9

nighthawkpm [2005-09-26 05:01:59 +0000 UTC]

hummm - I just think it acts as if he is the murder ( split person) as he knowns more than he should. But o well.

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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to nighthawkpm [2005-09-26 17:41:30 +0000 UTC]

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rastill [2005-08-23 00:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, great build-up

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nighthawkpm [2005-08-22 22:47:54 +0000 UTC]

great power

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pnub-x [2005-08-21 17:40:00 +0000 UTC]

ooo, a new character chasing after?.. cool

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thegreatmizuti [2005-08-21 17:39:43 +0000 UTC]

he got his act together lol

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Who-Is-Chill [2005-08-21 17:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Another one so so interesting.

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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to Who-Is-Chill [2005-08-21 17:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Who-Is-Chill In reply to clinicallybeyondhelp [2005-08-21 18:30:02 +0000 UTC]

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