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Published: 2010-06-09 12:13:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 15
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I thought I might use this as my new style to display my one-stanza poems, as it makes them a bit more expressive. (or at least I hope so xD please give me critique about it so that I know your thoughts ^^)<3 <3 <3
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XxNightingaleSongxX [2010-11-08 14:54:06 +0000 UTC]
You have written what has been going through my mind today!!!! I smile but it's not completly real. I don't open up to my guy-friends because I'm afraid of being rejected by them. My existence is not based on lies...it's based on art. Art keeps me alive. Art, poetry, singing and photography.
Wonderful poem. Very powerful. It brought pictures before my eyes. ^_^
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clock-wise In reply to XxNightingaleSongxX [2010-12-01 17:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I am really glad you can relate to my poem, but of course it is sad in a way, as it means that you're not okay either. I hope you can keep your Art in your heart forever, so that it can keep you alive and give you some happyness! I wish you all the best!
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XxNightingaleSongxX In reply to clock-wise [2010-12-02 02:24:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!! Me too!!! ^_^ No one's okay. Everyone is lacking something....whether that's a soulmate, art, religion, a passion for something or someone or anything really. Were never okay. We think everyone else is better than us, better off emotionaly. But that's not correct. We want to go back to the childlike innocence and happyness that we once had. Once the world catches up with you...with all it's busy worries and stupid standards you need to rise above to have a life. no one's okay until they've found those things. I'm not religious..MY RELIGION IS ART. HA!!! THAT'S MY NEW SIGNATURE!! ^_^
MY ART IS MY HEART, WITHOUT IT I WOULD DIE. THAT'S THAT. AS I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST AND GREATS TOO!! ^_^
THANKS!!
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clock-wise In reply to lilnutta10 [2010-06-09 14:30:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^ and thanks for the fav aswell
and now the question xD haha
For one-stanza poems:
Is it better to post them as a picture with background (like this one) or to just post them normally (just the grey text)
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lilnutta10 In reply to clock-wise [2010-06-09 14:39:10 +0000 UTC]
Very welcome
To answer your question:
I normally do perfer to just have the grey text because im use to doing it this way and it allows your work to speak for itself meaning it doesnt need exciting backgrounds to make it better
However for one stanza poems like you have done i would say continue to have them with a picture as it allows a deeper picture to be created like with colour black can show death etc.
But in the end, i would its best to go with what the artist themselves think as they are the only ones who know when their work is at its best.
Hope this has helped
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clock-wise In reply to 003665 [2010-06-09 12:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
do you think it's better to put short poems up like this or in the normal deviantart style? I want peoples opinions ^^
(and thank you soooo much for the fav )
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003665 In reply to clock-wise [2010-06-09 13:34:20 +0000 UTC]
vary them i think coz thats what i do lol
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