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Published: 2010-04-27 17:35:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 966; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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heres the first page for my entry into wonderlust.Next >> [link]
please comment on this one guys, I'm practicing a new lay out, and want to know if everything is looking alright.
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Ralph (c) ~Clock-workable
Wonderlust & Wakati (c) #Wonderlust-oct
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Comments: 36
SWEEEETNESS!
Yeah I agree with fluna. Make the Panel lines a bit thicker. But other than that this came out freakin' good! The Wakati's poses are adorable, just say'in.
Ralph's new hair is cute. Glad you find a style you can work with 8D
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thanks alot.
I will try and make the thicker in the secound page, see if that improves it at all.
the hair took like four diffrent attempts to get right
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I can help you fix the borders on the first page, if you want
Yeah you told me XD
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I really want to join this thing, but I dont have time for it.
I love yor character Ralph, his hair reminds me of caaandy :3
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hehehe XD
well don't eat it
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but..... it looks so.... yuuuuummyyyyy *drools*
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go drool over Dex hehe XD
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.....I don't feel like it >:C lol I still luz you Deeex~
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Make me some cookies! 8D
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no.....but now I have an idea for a pic..
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you'd love it, ehehe *shot*
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Uxim: It's okay Dex. That person's just a meanie face *points to me*
...... :'C
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Dex: yeeeah *cuddles uxim*
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Uxim: *smiles and cuddles back*
Me: *sits in emo corner*
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Dex: hehe, aaaw come over and get in the hug *opens arm*
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Me: ;A; *somehow flies into his arms*
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thanks :3
why aren't you on msn? heh I kid
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I see......then get back to work XD
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I'm trying! *works frantically on Mission #2 comic*
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I ment your school work, but okay
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The Wakati is stealing his stuff!!
Amusing so far c:
For my taste, I'd make the panel lines more noticeable
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okay, I will give that a try with the secound one.
thanks for the advice
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