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Clockchat β€” Not All Things Will Fade
Published: 2014-02-21 07:38:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2442; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Description With a sky that struggles to offer unpolluted clouds, streets rich in garbage-filled potholes, rivers with more diseases than water, and more car thieves than there are cars, no sound mind would remain in this town willingly. Out of the few compliments I've gotten, none were for my sanity, so no wonder I'm here. Among the bunch of senseless decisions I've forged a life with, what's another to the list? Anyone with the smarts Nature reserves for rocks would abandon this wasteland now...But back in the day, before factory owners jumped at the chance to screw it over? Still nothing to brag about, but it was decent enough. A quiet city to watch the days go by, to try and be happy within the imprisonment of everyday mediocrity.

Had she not been here, that is.

Routine made an art out of slaving townsfolk. She made an art out of giving Routine both middle fingers! Literal art at that, for no interaction with the outside world went ignored in the one of her own. Wherever she took a step, her creativity was along for the ride. Every walk we made around town reincarnated into a story, a drawing, a painting...Climate mattered not. Inspiration struck her via the sun as much as it did thanks to thunder, if not more so when the latter was at its loudest. Those were perfect vehicles for her imagination to take flight, and my admiration to grow that much more.

Time delights in dissolving. What once was here no longer remains. Such as the centuries' old forest, destroyed without further thought, to inaugurate a no doubt equally enriching parking lot. Robbers have ensured it can't even brag about having many cars. But have you read the stories she wrote when Nature at its purest surrounded us? When she'd take the time to appreciate the dignity of the ancient trees, in those walks she took with her dog? Such tales remain as powerful years later, and prove the existence of a beauty that's no longer in the here and now. Or what about the sky? Back then, it bothered to show other tonalities beyond "Look how little we care! Love, factories". However, the paintings she made when this place wasn't an ode to trash, they narrate a whole different story, when sunsets were allowed to make their presence known. Who knows if the town will have a chance to see them again, but her art has the shine the wild gray yonder lost a while ago.

Not gonna pretend she touched the whole town as much as she did me. For every person you meet, you miss what goes on in the lives of a million others. But I was fortunate she had the poor judgement to think me decent enough for friendship, and most importantly, that she'd teach me there was more to life than a self-made comfort zone. Her energy was contagious. Seeing her combine creativity with action made me eager to see what it was like. Creating anything I pleased, at any moment I wanted, just because I could? Count me in! Best of all, she was happy to support anyone who joined the war against Routine. Shedding light on the basics of prose for those interested in storytelling, sharing the numerous tactics she'd use when tackling a painting...Can't forget the scars from when she tried to teach me felting. The colorful language uttered after my many self-stabs, now that lives in the memory of anyone who was five meters around, I'm sure. So much to thank her for...

She didn't stay for long. As much inspiration as the city gave her, I knew she would leave soon. That it was too small a place for her ambitions, and eventually she'd seek new landscapes to harvest fresh art from. A look at the town tells me she made the right choice; surely there's less rocks and dust wherever she is now. Dare I say, she wanted me to move on as well. Don't think I ever did, but there's always time, isn't it? There's always another minute to take advantage of, even after the many I've wasted already. It isn't up to me that the clock keeps tick tocking, thank goodness. Always another sixty seconds to try and make worthwhile...She always did like jogging, and I bet she hasn't stopped. If I begin now, perhaps we'll catch up someday. Time to start taking my own steps.

Literally. Some bastard stole my car while I rambled aloud to myself.
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Comments: 31

Zani-Loki [2014-12-13 08:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Rayos con lo del auto xD

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Clockchat In reply to Zani-Loki [2014-12-13 10:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Pa' que siga hablΓ‘ndole a unas nubes que ni puede ver jajajaja!

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TheGalleryOfEve [2014-12-13 04:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!!
I’m very happy for you!!!

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Clockchat In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2014-12-13 10:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Have I ever told you that I just -adore- the way you are? You're always out there giving people encouragement, happy faces, support, in summary, pure unaltered love, and you do it with such an energy and frequency that it can't help but being contagious, and making me feel ever so fuzzy whenever I spot it. Thank you so much. Never change, Eve. Please

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to Clockchat [2014-12-17 01:42:28 +0000 UTC]

AAawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!Β 

You're so sweet!!!Β  Thank you!!!

Te prometo que no voy a cambiar!!!

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Clockchat In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-01-02 03:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, no sabΓ­a que hablabas espaΓ±ol! Hah, look who's talking about sweetness, lovely one!

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to Clockchat [2015-01-03 19:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Siiii!!!Β  Soy Argentina!!!

AaawwwΒ 

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Mrs-Durden [2014-12-13 03:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Your amazing work has been featured here: Daily Deviation Highlights V

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Clockchat In reply to Mrs-Durden [2014-12-13 10:29:10 +0000 UTC]

The support this community has given me is nothing short of heart melting. Mille mercis!Β Β 

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TheMaidenInBlack [2014-12-12 23:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your DD! this will be featured on mine and theWrittenRevolution 's pages, as part of a project to help lit DDs get more exposure. (:

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Clockchat In reply to TheMaidenInBlack [2014-12-13 10:23:07 +0000 UTC]

I feel like I didn't stop blushing all of today here in dA...You are all so very kind, I thank you like you've got no idea. Incidentally, I just had the pleasure of joining theWrittenRevolution at the beginning of this week, and I've found it a great place to check out new amazing pieces, and have talented writers give sharp notes on my stories. I'm honored to have my stuff featured in the profile of the group'sΒ Wordsmistress, and in the group itself! My whole gratitude to ya!

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TheMaidenInBlack In reply to Clockchat [2014-12-13 16:01:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad your day was that nice.

Haha, that's sweet of you to say - if it helps, being called Wordsmistress always makes me blush too. I hope you enjoy the group, and get some well-thought feedback on your pieces!

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Zeaphra247 [2014-12-12 16:57:50 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful. Love that last line though. A bit out of character in a way from the rest of the piece but in a way that is perfect for the piece.

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Clockchat In reply to Zeaphra247 [2014-12-13 10:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Hah! You flatter me. Few things make me happier here than when people take their time to leave a piece of their minds in my gallery work. Thanks a ton for your comment!

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Sandicmxr [2014-12-12 16:36:32 +0000 UTC]

I had a great time reading this and the twist πŸ™€πŸ™€ Ha ha. Congrats on the DD.

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Clockchat In reply to Sandicmxr [2014-12-13 10:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, I'm a silly fellow like that, thank you so much for the comment and the fave, real happy you dug it!

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Lintu47 [2014-12-12 15:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD, beautiful story!
Have a nice day!

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Clockchat In reply to Lintu47 [2014-12-13 10:12:51 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't freaking believe it! I was seeing favorites left and right and was confused, then I saw your comment and I think my WHAAAAAAT awoke the neighbors! Even after coming all the way here and confirming it I couldn't give credit to my eyes. Thank you so much, very glad you liked it, and have the best of days yourself!

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Lintu47 In reply to Clockchat [2014-12-14 15:26:21 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, thank you!
Enjoy it, your story truly deserves all the attention it can get!

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SilverInkblot [2014-11-15 18:45:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm seeing a bit of pretension in the narrator - I don't know if it's him or your writing yet He has a sort of wanna-be philosopher poet to his words, looking down on the city without acting or better it (or himself) in any way. He has his moments (the sentence about Routine was a real standout), but he's also kind of annoying. If that wasn't your intention, I would consider cutting down on the verbosity - you don't need excessive words to make a simple story powerful.

Especially with such a clever ending You have a real knack for the twist ending.

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Clockchat In reply to SilverInkblot [2014-11-15 18:56:50 +0000 UTC]

This one's a piece that's sort of a priority to get fine-tuned soon, what with being dedicated to my good friend brietta-a-m-f (whose work I totally suggest you check!). It's the lone piece I uploaded between July 2013 and Cold Shoulders, and I take all responsibility if the narrator proves an obstacle to the enjoyment of the piece, instead of adding to it. (There's some parallels with the guy visiting a deserted town, and me being rusty in the writing field when I tackled this). Albeit I dig the idea of you disliking him, only to find out the blabbermouth has had his vehicle robbed x) But no, you're entirely right. I wanna give this one a good revision before the month wraps up, and will take your comment into account.Β Thanks a lot for your insight!

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SilverInkblot In reply to Clockchat [2014-11-15 18:59:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it would take much polishing to get this one to shine Really, I think it just needs some cutting and rewording. It rambles on a bit much, essentially saying the same things in different ways.

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pro-mole [2014-06-06 21:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Talking of criminally belated things...

Yup, this was a read that took forever, but it was worthwhile. All's worth if the soul ain't petty, said a poet once, and then I probably butchered it trying to translate it.

Ok, staying on topic: I need to get on track with Brietta's stories, too. But one neglected writer at a time...

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Clockchat In reply to pro-mole [2014-11-14 23:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Criminally belated things? This reply will go well with that! Hah, thanks a bunch, Molerino. Oh, if you're to focus on a writer at the time, do yourself a favor and make it Brietta...Not that there's much here to analyze anyway!

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Shawna-Stimple [2014-05-12 06:10:31 +0000 UTC]

You have a way with the English language that I can only hope to one day achieve. Keep it coming hun.

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Clockchat In reply to Shawna-Stimple [2014-11-14 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]

You've got a way to get blush on this here cheeks, missy! Thanks a lot!

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Cleoparia [2014-03-06 05:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Duuuuuuuude this is a beautiful story. The imagery is fantastic. I love how the unnamed girl and the past seemed to be synonymous. And the ending was funny hehehe

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Clockchat In reply to Cleoparia [2014-11-14 23:06:57 +0000 UTC]

I love how pure your comments always are, fratello. And all the continuous support too! Thanks a lot for sticking by!

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brietta-a-m-f [2014-02-21 08:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Aw, dude! This is amazing! It makes me happier than green hedgehogs or blue badgers! (Yes, there may be a blue badger on the way soon!) I really love the play on the title of my photo here, and the little references made me giggle and blush more than once! Thank you so much for this!

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Clockchat In reply to brietta-a-m-f [2014-11-14 23:08:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww man. I should be incarcerated for responding to such a sweet comment so damn late, but better late than ever...(why, two more months and it's your birthday again!) It was my pleasure writing this for someone whose dedication and ambition I admire, and if there's something good to replying to this with such delay, is that those feelings have only augmented. Aye aye, Brietta!

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brietta-a-m-f In reply to Clockchat [2014-11-17 22:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Ai ai ai, another birthday so soon? Heavens, where did the year go!

Anywho, the dedication and ambition probably wouldn't have gotten as far without the encouragement of people like you! ... I'm gonna stop there before I sound like a PBS commercial...

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