HOME | DD
Clockwork-Jack — Poor Writing - Pg 1
#portal2 #tsp #portal2comic #thestanleyparable #poorwriting #thestanleyparablexportal2 #thestanleyparablecomic
Published: 2015-12-13 09:28:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 995; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description
Page one of a The Stanley Parable x Portal 2 fan-comic, written and illustrated by and myself! We'll be taking turns drawing the pages, trying to post one per week! And so, the story begins.Stanley is fun to draw. He's a smol, lost cinnamon roll.
Next: Poor writing page - 2
Cover: authorjack.deviantart.com/art/…
The Stanley Parable © Galactic Cafe
Portal 2 © Valve Corporation
Related content
Comments: 28
"Little did he know that a couple of giggling, artistic teenage girls were manipulating his life--his every breath--from far above. On two different sides of the planet. Taking turns ruining his actions, behavior... And they laughed, as they did so. Plotting the next best way to rip him apart, emotionally.
But Stanley couldn't know that. Stanley was in a fictional office building, that happened to also be Fan-Fiction."
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thank you very much!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You're very welcome, friend!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Aaaand so it begins.
can't wait to get started on the next page!!
this is gonna be so awesome
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
*Announcer voice*
LET THE 75TH HUNGER GAMES, BEGIIIIIIIIIIN.
It already is. 8'I
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.
SO GLAD YOU'RE A FAN.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
"YES!!!! I GOT THE BROOM CLOSET ENDING!!!!!" XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
"DID YOU GET THE BROOM CLOSET ENDING? THE BROOM CLOSET ENDING WAS MY FAVORITE."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
YESSSSSS XD
"UMM ATTENTION PEOPLE, THE PLAYER AT THIS DESK HAS DIED, PLEASE REMOVE THEIR CORPSE AND REPLACE THEM WITH SOMEONE WITH BASIC UNDERSTANDING OF FIRST PERSON GAME CONTROLS AND HISTORY SO THAT MY WITTY SARCASM WILL NOT BE WASTED ON THEM."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
AHAHAHA~
Do you have a favorite ending? Or more than one?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
THE BROOM CLOSET ENDING WAS THE BEST ONE
Jks, I like the confusion ending XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ohhh yes, that's a good one!
I like the suicide ending. (The one where you go the pretty lights place--AKA Zending--and then have to jump off the top of some stairs repeatedly). I know, I know--it's morbid. But that was when I started to really feel bad for the Narrator. D:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I know he's like "Go back to the lights! Please! Just go back to the room and be happy...." :iconfinallyplease: Poor narrator sir.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I KNOW. And then he just gives up once you start to jump off, and he's so desperate and broken. D: Like: "Oh, sorry Narrator. Guess you cared a smidgen for me after all."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
XD Oh, you cared? I didn't notice it under all that sarcasm XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
The Narrator puts Sarcasm on like Lady Gaga does makeup.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Narrator: *Burning*
Stanley: "Would you like some Aloe Vera. For the burn."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Narrator: *Touches Stanly and he sets on fire too*
Stanley: -w-"
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Narrator: "Let's just add some gasoline to that, shall we?"
Stanley: "N--"
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BOOM. To put it shortly, BOOM.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BOOM.
*Stanley wakes back up in his office, sitting up with a scream*
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Stanley: Oh god not again
Narrator: *Facepalms* (forgot that Stanley respawns)
XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Stanley: "My body hurts."
Narrator: "Well... Good."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1