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Description
I've been working on this for a couple weeks. I thought it would be fun to tackle this character again for personal reasons and also story reasons. For the record this is a colored sketch :>

This is my character "Venagi" or just "Ven" for short.

Character Features
-putting this here for my reference-
He is Bero's rival and the one who kills his mate. He is also considerably larger, at least twice as big
He has a long prehensile tongue
Blood has acidic properties
The feathers on his body are more like sharp quills. The black tips indicate toxic properties
He has viper like fangs. Meaning he can inject venom (not shown)
Saliva is sticky and comes off in dry strands rather than more of a liquid.
Instead of breathing fire he lets loose a poison gas that when taken in develops into a sticky film that causes respiratory complications and can result in death by suffocation

Heres the first version for comparison

If you cant tell I simplified him severely. He no longer has the shackles around his ankles/wrist or the random chains and straps. I took away the markings along his belly/underside and just added some spots. I like his new look but I count this as a work in progress. I'd like to add something more but I just dont know. I'm open for suggestions!

This character belongs to me. Please do not use in any way, shape or form without expressed permission. No copying or tracing. I do not allow my characters to be used for any other stories or RP's besides my own. Thank you for your cooperation

Is mine

Description
I've been working on this for a couple weeks. I thought it would be fun to tackle this character again for personal reasons and also story reasons. For the record this is a colored sketch :>

This is my character "Venagi" or just "Ven" for short.

Character Features
-putting this here for my reference-
He is Bero's rival and the one who kills his mate. He is also considerably larger, at least twice as big
He has a long prehensile tongue
Blood has acidic properties
The feathers on his body are more like sharp quills. The black tips indicate toxic properties
He has viper like fangs. Meaning he can inject venom (not shown)
Saliva is sticky and comes off in dry strands rather than more of a liquid.
Instead of breathing fire he lets loose a poison gas that when taken in develops into a sticky film that causes respiratory complications and can result in death by suffocation

Heres the first version for comparison

If you cant tell I simplified him severely. He no longer has the shackles around his ankles/wrist or the random chains and straps. I took away the markings along his belly/underside and just added some spots. I like his new look but I count this as a work in progress. I'd like to add something more but I just dont know. I'm open for suggestions!

This character belongs to me. Please do not use in any way, shape or form without expressed permission. No copying or tracing. I do not allow my characters to be used for any other stories or RP's besides my own. Thank you for your cooperation

Is mine