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ClockworkGoth — Ink Spot
Published: 2005-11-14 01:51:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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A careless drop of inkFalls silently to my page
And like a cancer
Spreads
It runs down my paper
Ruining my work
My words become illegible
My paper
Becomes soggy and weak
All because
I paused
On one word
Just a little
To long
The wrong emphasis
And everything
Is ruined
Because
Of one
Careless
Drop
Of ink
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Comments: 13
the layout's great and works cleverly within the poem. Very nice.
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Fantastic! You accomplished exactly what you set out to do. It does flow like the drop of ink and there is a much deeper meaning behind the words. Wonderful work!
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WOOTEDNESS!! I like how it describes something so simple but still includes all the littlest details!
Your work is awsome!
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it so much. By the way Wootedness is now totaly entering my vocabulary
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It's a beautiful peice!
I'm no good at commenting on poetry
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Sok I'm glad you liked it
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Wow...so discriptive and elegant...I love it<3
Great Job!
[and yea i see the pattern too 
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Thanks I'm glad you see it to and I'm really glad you liked it.
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uh huh
it was awesome
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