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Published: 2007-09-28 06:55:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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So many designs on your hoodieYou look like a TV that can't get reception.
And maybe this is true
'cause it seems you've missed the news
and all you seem to care about is your
three hundred dollar shoes.
An I hope they make you run fast too
For when big brother comes for you.
'Cause Nike won't back you up
They'll be too busy exploiting 3rd world children
To make you more shoes.
Oh but thats right
You missed the news.
'Cause they're askin' you son
To be the one to go and carry a gun
And your fatigues won't be made by Louis Vuitton.
And your enemy won't be 13
Walking down a dark street alone.
No 9 millimeter gatt in a backpack
For you.
Oh but thats right you missed the news
You were too busy buying shoes
I wish I could tune
The head,
In that hoddie,
In
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Comments: 6
if the "An" is supposed to be an abbreviated "And" in "And I hope they make you run fast too" it should either have an apostrophe or a hyphen after the n. unless it was a typo and s upposed to be and.
you put two "when"s in "for when big brother comes after you"
"they'll be too busy exploiting 3rd world children"
cause "they're" asking you son [they're=they are. their=belonging to they]
and "your" fatigues [you're refers to you are. your refers to something belonging to you]
"walking" down a dark street alone.
you were too busy busying shoes.
sounds like stephen. if stephen didnt know shit of the world.
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LOl and I fixed it
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fix the 'And'
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I really like it... We should do a poetry workshop-type thingie together!
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