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An attempt to paint without lines other than the original sketc0h and not in chibi form.

To improvement-club: Would appreciate tips on anything.. but especially on these~
a) anatomy (always) especially the hands, they just aren't working very well, though I did try the whole break it up into shapes thing I don't have a clear enough picture of what I want them to look like I guess.
b) perspective: I did try to have a little, but there isn't very much and I would love for the picture to 'pop'
c) lighting: uh, tried for bluish light from window and yellowish light from lamp.. should I emphasize more? I am thinking that there needs to be more shadows.
Thank you so much in advance!
PS. Submitted to Correct me - manga, as I don't think this really qualifies as realism.

Description
An attempt to paint without lines other than the original sketc0h and not in chibi form.

To improvement-club: Would appreciate tips on anything.. but especially on these~
a) anatomy (always) especially the hands, they just aren't working very well, though I did try the whole break it up into shapes thing I don't have a clear enough picture of what I want them to look like I guess.
b) perspective: I did try to have a little, but there isn't very much and I would love for the picture to 'pop'
c) lighting: uh, tried for bluish light from window and yellowish light from lamp.. should I emphasize more? I am thinking that there needs to be more shadows.
Thank you so much in advance!
PS. Submitted to Correct me - manga, as I don't think this really qualifies as realism.