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ClovisCorvus — Hiccup and Toothless
Published: 2019-09-08 18:17:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1202; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 1
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Some fan art from one of my favorite Dreamworks movies.Related content
Comments: 5
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I really enjoy this piece, especially because it's drawn in hand and that's my best ground. The shading is good and you added a background that fits the mood you're trying to meet. However, there are always mistakes and there is no such thing as a perfect piece of artwork. You are pretty good at anatomy, but I feel like The face on Hiccup isn't shaped right... You did the eyes and mouth very good but I think it's the nose that's catching my eye. The next thing I noticed was the perspective of hiccup in front of toothless. Yes, it does look like hiccup is in front, but it also looks like is he were to step next to toothless, he would be almost his height. I know it's pretty tough when it comes to perspective so I get it. Sometimes you have to keep the height comparisons in mind while doing this. There's also the placement of the right wing. I know the anatomy dragons and I know what you're trying to do, But I feel like because of the angle that wing should be a little farther on the back, away from the first wing. These are the only critiques I've got, I hope this helped!
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Nicely done! Hiccup's face could use a small bit of balancing but aside from that, you captured them spot-on!
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