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Very beautiful posing. Angle and framing of the piece is very good, material settings are spot on and just enough shadowing to be quite appealing. There are a few things that would make this piece stand out even more so lets get to it. The light and shadow have good intensity but the over all temp of the light is a bit cold for a passion scene. I think this could be fixed in post by a little more contrast, upping the saturation a bit and lowering the overall brightness. From a posing perspective perhaps raising the head of the girl on her back to make her meet the gaze of the girl on top might add to the tension of the piece. One other maybe taste thing would be to back light your subjects with a candle like light would help to bring out the silhouettes of the figures in a dramatic fashion along with a subtle depth of field to separate your subjects from the background a bit.
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thank you for taking the time to critique my work. Your suggestions are very helpful.
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Most welcome. If we help each other it raises the bar for Digital art!
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When there is passion, clothes come out too much
After makingΒ love passionately, the two beauties should go out for a promenade in a gondola for the romantic Venice... both that remain completely naked 
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This is an interesting picture. The lighting makes it look like a performance, rather than an initimate moment. I wouldn't be surprised to find we're watching this scene surrounded by a film crew.
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