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Published: 2003-09-03 04:33:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Going to a place nowHopefully it'll be better
Going away for sometime now
Hopefully you won't be there
I hate the way you make the world turn
I hate the way that you turn to face me
I hate the way you make me cry
Favorites?
Nothing comes to mind
Nothing seems to stand out
Were you my favorite?
No, I can't say that you were
Were you the thing I longed for?
No, I can't say that you were
Hopefully I will be alone in my favorite place again
Going to the grind
Hopefully things will change
Going to look at my mind
Hopefully you won't be there
I hate the way you make things the same
I hate the way you create more and more tears
I hate the way you make me die
Favorites?
Nothing comes to mind
Nothing seems to stand out
Were you my favorite?
No, I can't say that you were
Were you the thing I longed for?
No, I can't say that you were
Hopefully I will be alone in my favorite place again
TALK TO ME
Maybe I can stay
TALK TO ME
You haven't said a word
TALK TO ME
Maybe you will change
LEAVE ME NOW
Change is what I yearn
Favorites?
Nothing comes to mind
Nothing seems to stand out
Were you my favorite?
No, I can't say that you were
Were you the thing I longed for?
No, I can't say that you were
Hopefully I will be alone in my favorite place again
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Comments: 2
*smiles* Actually.. I think you've managed to touch on your earlier style.. and mix the new .. and then.. grow out of both and create something .. just a little new.. just a little better.. and all the finer than before.. its lovely my friend.. absolutely lovely.
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first, i love the screen shot.
second, i really like the repeating stanza.
third, i like this line the best: I hate the way you make the world turn.
very well written.
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