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Original series, "Codename: Paranormal".Read left to right.
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I don't like how there are two different ideas going on in this page. It completes this intro scene and then immediately goes into the obligatory protagonist introduction. I think it's best to allow the intro to start on a different page and fill the rest of the panel with a larger version of Paranormal holding his gun. The angle it's currently at doesn't work as a compelling image because the focus isn't on the gun pointing at you. It needs much more dramatic foreshortening.
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Hm, good point. I did also hate how this turned out as well. The whole thing is a short intro, but you're correct the transition was weird. Oh well, trial and error, I am also learning as I go. Thanks for the feed back!
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