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Published: 2010-12-07 19:21:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description your round face
is a virgin pink rose
with closed curtain promise

my eyes sparkle
with limelight dreams
of your unveiled beauty

cherubs flutter and draw
the timid bloom open
to a breathtaking vision

on slender stem grace
features perfectly nest
and face to the sun

decorating a dais
as an oasis
this enshrouded beauty

glitters fantasy dust
randomly as applause
showers rose admiration
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Comments: 2

sky-scrapers [2010-12-23 22:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, who is this? Lol this is so breathtakingly beautiful. Like this girl is so innocent, seen as a pink rose. I love how the flower is symbolic of her. Your voice in the piece is very nice.

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cogs10 In reply to sky-scrapers [2010-12-25 04:33:41 +0000 UTC]

you're nice. i noticed that my wife's round face is smooth like a rose, so i thought it was good metaphor, especially with a double metaphor of a rose opening like a curtain for the anticipation of the audience. thank you for taking the time to comment.

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