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Published: 2004-06-01 02:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 23
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Testing depth of field. The keys of a piano... which evidently need dusting.Related content
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hi. just some comments or critique, of a lousy shooter if you don't mind.
as mallardx has said, great perspective and all. good idea on the angle of the shot and composition wise, its a winner and framing as well. i like the way the viewer's eyes are guided to the foreground naturally by the running keys. but, you could had done a better shot by lowering the exsposure. there's far too much light in the picture.
if it was up to me to take a shot, i would drop the top part of the picture, the lyrics or melodies stand, or whatever you call that thing. or rather, i would not show that much. my main focus would be the keys and that would probable take up a good 75% of the entire shot? a slight tilt of the angle of the shot might just bring in more keys, more details as well.
okie, that's the end of my critique. hope you don't mind. cheers.
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Thank you for your critique, it is indeed helpful. I was just playing around with an old digital camera one day and wanted to see how it handled a shot of this type so I was not trying to perfect the shot. You have some very good suggestions on how to do so however, so it is appreciated 
Thanks for taking a look, I will keep these things in mind.
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no worries. i am a lousy shot myself and is constantly looking for ways to improve. go back to that piano now and reshoot! "))
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I will say that I would have to disagree with you, you have a very nice gallery --you are not a lousy shot at all.
I would if I still lived there
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"(( noone's to disagree with me! i am the tyrant! what i say is true!
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not when your skill proves otherwise!
if you are a tyrant then watch out, I may have to overthrow you somehow
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cool, post it so I can have a look
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The eprspective along with the keyboard geometry add up to a winning picture.
M-
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