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The accompanying poem for [link]Yes, I changed it a little...
And the illustration isn't as detailed a usual, but hey, I was in a hurry, okay?
And, if it's hard to read in that font:
I drove all night just to see you,
and you weren't even there
But when I came home,
I could sense you in the air
You're a falling satellite,
burning brighter as you die,
You're a humid summer's night,
pierced by a waltzing firefly
footsteps echoing down a timeless hall,
the illegible genius of a poet's scrawl
You're nothing but a crooked smile,
but oh, my love, my muse,
won't you just come in
and stay a while?
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Very nice, the funny irony of this was that the only word I couldn't make out was "illegible".
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This is really lovely the art work fit is really nicely with the poem, I <3 the little guy in the botton corner heh :]
The poem is also vair vair gutt indeed. Really rather sad and it's got a sort of desperation to it that's quite touching.
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Thank you!
But I must admit, I'm not familiar with the term "vair vair gutt." What precisely does it mean?
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Ah it would be me trying to be a crazy German countess.
Vair vair gutt = very very good.
I'm a little bit of a dork.
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Ah. That makes sense. It's okay, being a dork it as times commendable. Or at least amusing.
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I try to at least go for amusing...
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the combination of the art and words definitely gives it an extra dimension ^_^
i love the roughness of it, the fact that it's not perfect
good one yet again ^_^
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Thanks. 
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XD that makes sense
oh, and you're welcome ^_^
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A little inside joke never hurt anyone...
Are you going to post that new one you're working on?
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I agree with everything: the art, the words, everyone else's comments.
Reminds me of a desire for something intangible, something only personally meaningful, but so much more powerful than most anything else, not too mention the capacity to convey it's significance.
Or that's how I intepret anyhoo.
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Thank you very much, Jamie. 
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Pretty similar to my perspective of it too, in many ways [=
You're very welcome.
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I love the total effect here - the sketch-work the words they symmetry and balance...
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Thanks, Dave. 
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I SPY MATT BELLAMY!!! Right?
Like the poem, like the picture, like YOU. YUMMY.
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Yes...it was based on Matt Bellamy... I mean, it wasn't supposed to exactly be him per se, but yeah...
You win.
Thanks!
But PRETTY PLEASE DON'T EAT MEH! 
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Recognised the pose. 
Aw, but you look yummy.
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I drove all night just to see you,
and you weren't even there
But when I came home,
I could sense you in the air
yes. yesyesyes.
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You're nothing but a crooked smile,
but oh, my love, my muse,
won't you just come in
and stay a while?
Imaginary friends are the best kind of friends.
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Of course, then it's also twice as bad when they decide to leave you...
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