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Published: 2007-04-09 04:54:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 10
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I wanted to make something for my good friend Lauren Hand and this is what came out.I think its beautiful.
Advanced Critique Encouraged.
Im writing a poem to go along with it, so if you enjoy poetry then keep an eye open.
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Comments: 7
comaprophet In reply to Ogmire [2008-04-07 17:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank You, I enjoyed its creation.
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gr8shiva [2007-04-09 10:00:51 +0000 UTC]
Really nice. Advanced critique+ perhaps a little more contrast between the butterfly and the insect looking thing that appears to be underneath? Right now they look like they are on the same plane. Might be nice if they had a feeling of distance (even if millimeters) from each other....
Other than that, lovely. I made it my wallpaper!
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comaprophet In reply to gr8shiva [2007-04-09 15:46:55 +0000 UTC]
I have another version of this that Im working on, I think seperating the two in some way is definately a good idea, I will try it. : )
Thanks, its my wallpaper as well.
Namaste.
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