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801 watchers?! Okay that's a crazy number - I don't think I've even met that many people in my life
So again, thank you to everyone who has watched me since way back when (Iloveyouall) and a big welcome to my new watchers - it's my final year of uni so uploads and replies will be a bit sporadic but I promise I will always get back to any notes or comments at some point!
Anyways, here are some of my fave literature pieces I've come across on dA in the last few months as a massive thank you gift
Mature Content
year of the tigerIt is April of 1998, the year of the tiger, and
she was with you from the very beginning of it all.
Scarlet-stripped, you are thrown into life too fast,
far-flung and ravenous in a California hospital too small
to hold you, and you screamed because she leapt
into your throat and made your voice her echo.
But all too soon you realized that you were born
with a rib cage, and you locked her away before
she could even taste your mother’s blood on your lips.Fourth grade beneath printer-paper snowflakes,
alphabets of boredom. They tell you that a heart is
atrium and ventricle but even after seeing the
neat little diagram you don’t quite beli...
Blood MotherI love you in your inexistence
rabbit’s ear
baby’s breath
you are dust
but you are
mine.Misadventures and
dew drop mornings
small curls
large eyes
my bones cannot knit your future.Sunsets and moonbeams
sleep burdens our eyes
your soft lips sigh
there is a better world for you
than this.-D.E.M
dollydarling boy, you wrapped your fingers
round my wrist and tugged me close
enough to kiss (i didn't want to,
no, i told you to drive and you told me
there's a difference between being scared and not
wanting to let go -i almost killed you)i fell in love with you in three out of
four years, dreaming from a
distance and hitching my breath when they came
to an end -i fell out of love with you in a week and three
days, two minutes too close to
almost-midnight
as we sat in the front seat of your car
and i turned away for the first time
(it was the first second you doubted
i was yours and the first i knew
i didn't want you to be mine)i think i shut...
An Editor's NoteI lose half dream on Thursday
and there are no heartstrings to vibrate and echo in its absence
no word that’s decent enough
to take its place
there is not the tentative pause of a movie -
the moment before lips touch
on Thursday I lose half a dream and say
‘oh’I am told that I will meet people with the universe rubbed into their skin
those who carry themselves like an unused jacket
half off the hanger
I will meet people with sick souls or bird throats
people with a laugh like flat stones skidding across a glass lake
those who talk about their dogs too much or drink straight from the milk carton
people who are thawing instead of teari...
AnaestheteSo he tore his roots back
from hell’s old circles
and set his branches
alight from within
heaven’s gates, and his leaves
burned autumnal
for a time.The angels and fallen
let out their sighs,
and two young lovers
carved their letters
into an old maple.He did not feel
the words cutting,
or the love
therein.
the five steps of stitching together a wound1. i fall out of love with you on a tuesday.
to be honest, i don’t know it’s happening until
it’s happened, until i sit in my bed that night
and look at the neat holes you’ve left
dotting my life. weeks ago, i gave you back
your jacket when the weather
turned warm enough that i wasn’t smoking
with every breath. the space it took up
on my desk chair remains emptied, buti am sure it will be filled again soon,
with piles of books i will never lend you
and poems you will never hear me speak,
that aren’t about you, that use words i’ve never
told you, like ‘vitriol’ and ‘bubbly’.2. loving you was consuming, was every two in...
tumblr boy.you’re my aesthetic
with roses wrapped around
your fists and dressed
in all black from head to toe,
you’ve got wanderlust shining
in your eyes
and sad poetry dripping
from your lips,
just another punk rock loser
with steel in his veins and
fear in his heart—
your soul is pouting
but you hold every ounce
of that fuck all attitude
you can muster in
your slender shoulders
because we live in
an “eat or be eaten” kinda
world but you’d rather
just be laying on your bedroom
floor listening to the
rain make love to your window
and your favorite songs
whisper in your ear while you
silently contemplate life
and rebelliously flirt
with he...
on distancethis is how the distance kills you
and this is how the kilometres stretch
across your skin like little scales on a map
too uniform to measure out
your longing. they run down your hands
that are always empty and across
the spaces to someone whose hands
may or may not be collecting
the moments you couldn't be bothered
to count. you only know that
they all fall under the category of
another time when i was alone .you take walks. or try to.you end up sitting
by your front door, shoes half-laced,
and you tell yourself that this is only
the first time, that you are allowed
time to dissipate and wonder
how many synonyms there are for
lost .you ...
after the party.He's drunk in the backseat. "Anna. Anna. Anna," he moans, as if my name is a broken record his throat can't stop scratching; his voice is nettles and thorns, every natural prick and annoyance. My knuckles go white on the wheel.Ryan's riding shotgun and he won't look at me. "If you need me to drive him home, I can do it," he offers sheepishly. I don't answer, just press my foot to the gas and let the engine's rusty roar engulf John's voice.I peek in the rearview mirror. John's laying across the seat like a dead trout, and I can tell Ryan hasn't even bothered to buckle his seat belt. There's a photo album in John's arms that he clings to wi...
The Month of OctoberHugh Everett's ashes are in the dumpster behind the restaurant I work at. I know because they start moving on Monday. By Tuesday, there is a writhing charred leg and parts of his open torso. Wednesday, he speaks to me for the first time."What year is it?""I think you might implode if you knew.""Makes sense. Do you smoke, doll?" I light a cigarette for him, having pulled it with quivering fingers from my apron, and put it in his mouth. He leans up against a garbage bag leaking shake mix and puffs, exhaling clouds. "This is weak. Lady cigarettes."He rips off the filter with his teeth. He only has three fingers on his left hand and his righ...
hansel and gretel, with ptsdwhen hansel comes to with
the witch dead at his feet, he hangs gretel
off him like a blood bag, drags
her toes through the dirt, and he thinks
she has to be broken in a ballet,
she has to be broken in a pirouette.
her toes continue to click in her shoes
years later, a crunch that he is
reminded of years later againwhen the moon hung
like it does at midnight, as yellow as
a sick child, facing the forest. hansel
is rubbing his blue jeans like he does
sometimes, the heels of his palms
dragging the surface like nails on wood.
it feels like fire and coal, a numbing
that feels necessary until hansel says,
“stop.” and when he sees herher face...
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Comments: 36
EsotericHeart [2016-02-12 05:57:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the feature, you're lovely. ♥
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SurrealNacre [2016-02-06 21:52:19 +0000 UTC]
I've been so busy lately i didnt even congratulate you! but congrats on the much deserved amount of watchers <3
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comatose-comet In reply to SurrealNacre [2016-02-11 18:59:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much lovely
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hopeburnsblue [2016-02-05 03:14:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for featuring my writing in such a lovely collection. And, I'm not surprised about all the watchers one bit. I love your writinig!
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comatose-comet In reply to hopeburnsblue [2016-02-11 18:59:29 +0000 UTC]
as always thank you so much for your support Mel, you truly are one in a million and I'm so glad that I've got to know you even a little bit these past nearly two years
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FridgePoetProject [2016-02-02 09:08:37 +0000 UTC]
What a fantastic collection of wordsmithery, indeed! The mini-magnets are honored to be among the ranks. Many thanks for putting this together for us, my dear!
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comatose-comet In reply to FridgePoetProject [2016-02-11 18:58:44 +0000 UTC]
you're always welcome lovely
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crystallized-skies [2016-02-01 22:40:07 +0000 UTC]
Same! We can get through this last year of uni together woo!
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comatose-comet In reply to crystallized-skies [2016-02-11 19:00:34 +0000 UTC]
haha it's killing meeee so much work, and the real world is just around the corner
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crystallized-skies In reply to comatose-comet [2016-02-11 23:46:00 +0000 UTC]
shhhhhhhhhh let's not talk about the real world
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LadyBitterblue [2016-02-01 18:55:41 +0000 UTC]
congratulations! i'm so happy for you. for all those people who have the pleasure of reading your works, too. ^^ don't get too stressed over uni & have a wonderful year
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comatose-comet In reply to LadyBitterblue [2016-02-11 19:02:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much as always lovely (aah those cats made my day so cute!! ) and I hope you're doing okay too in this still relatively new year
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ParalyticProcess [2016-02-01 13:05:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the feature! I greatly appreciate it!
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comatose-comet In reply to Whyles [2016-02-01 19:03:44 +0000 UTC]
no problem I always love your writing
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aprilwednesday [2016-02-01 04:47:41 +0000 UTC]
that's so awesome, congrats!!!
and thank you for featuring me alongside such lovely pieces
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Khaimin [2016-02-01 04:18:26 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on so many watchers!! Holy crow, that's almost too high to count.
Good luck with this last year of Uni and thank you for the feature! (it's beautiful!)
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comatose-comet In reply to Khaimin [2016-02-11 19:05:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you again, and you're so welcome for the feature, I adore your writing
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skullhips [2016-02-01 01:32:03 +0000 UTC]
CONGRATULATIONS ASDFGHJKL <33333!!
thank you so fucking much for the feature sldflkhjledsje
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comatose-comet In reply to skullhips [2016-02-11 19:05:57 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome gurrlll (I wish da had more sassy emoticons I would send you all of them)
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comatose-comet In reply to wei-en [2016-02-01 19:04:37 +0000 UTC]
thank you! and no problem lovely
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