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Comet-Strike — Android Rarity/ Steamwing Beauty Mk.II
Published: 2014-05-05 07:49:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1915; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 0
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This is the most favorite creation of SteamwingSteamwing decided that the threat through the main six got serious and upgraded his loved Steamwing Beauty to a merciless killer machine. He put extra effort and love in every upgrade, every part and every screw to make 'Her' perfectly prepared for battle.
Size: Medium
Strength: 700% of Original (Steamwing Beauty)comet-strike.deviantart.com/ar…
550% of previous Original (Rarity)
Equipment:
Extendable blade and small caliber gun (Right arm)
Crystal cannon (electrically charged) and combat blade (Left arm)
Shield generator (Magic Deny)*
Telekinesis module*
Additional plating
shaped engraving with steamwings name*
1* This shield protects body and system from magical manipulation like teleport, telekinesis and illusion spells.
2* This module creates a magnetic field around unorganic material and can move it in any direction and 'shoot' it through a strong impulse.
3* He really loves this creation, strange don't you think?
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Comments: 32
unfortunally you have to 
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Its ok! its not that i can wait, its that i will.
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I'm happy that somebody is interrested in my storys
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Hey bro, i feel the same about mine on fimfiction. We all start from somewhere though, don't we?
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yeah. the problem is my story extend with every creation i do. I know the beginning i know the end and the important events but i'm stuck to write the trivia stuff like convestions :/
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Same here, dude. I'm writing a sequel to my first story on Fimfiction and When I look back at my old story, every chapter in between the first two and last two, looks like i was just struggling to think of story for it. When it comes to story writing though, having experience and planning out the whole story works really good.
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I have the fear that my first fimfiction is badly written and the whole story don't get the attention it deserves. English is not my mother tongue and i really have no time to write. I reconized that i need help. If you want an example: I started my first fanfiction at season 2-3 and I'm still not finished. (not because it's that long, it's because I don't get my shit together
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Yeah. it happens over time. Listen though, Your going to do fine, im sure you will! Its great that you've taken ambition with your fim fiction, which is nice... Do you work a regular day job, or are you still in school/collage? If you have a regular day job, i can see why you have no time, but if you're in school, collage, or a university (Depending on where you live) Then the summer might be a good time to write. I'm on my second big fan fiction tight now, which is my third, and i've learned a lot just from asking famous fiction writers on tips. Maybe you should think of doing the same.
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Yeah I'm working all day and usually i just got my pc at weekend. But you are right 
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Anytime! I don't mind helping a good ol' friend out.
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I'll call you if I need help
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Ok! Im here if you need me.
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oh oh... this cant be good... 
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Thank you 
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story? sounds awesome!!!
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It's about the main six against steamwing and his robots. It will be futuristic with plasma and stuff
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damn... i like plasma... the real plasma
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Yeah plasma is neat, I'm not sure what the 'real' plasma is but i guess it's pretty hot
Anyway i try to make 'logical' (if i can say that) warfare, all creations are equipped with different weapons and specified in different groups. Every Creation is made for another kind of mission and i think i'm getting a bit to far
My mind can be complicated sometimes...
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np.... if you need some help with crazy fantasie creations... feel free to ask
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The Hope for Equestria and Steamwing series is not completed yet, after they are finished I may need your help
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alright, you know how you find me, good luck young author
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I know
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I'm glad you say that ^^
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Oh yes, your concepts are really impressive
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that looks very awesome dude
i like your style very much OuO
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Thanks
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