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So he's supposed to be Mike ShinodaWell, I tried ^^u
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kendji [2007-10-16 21:48:52 +0000 UTC]
Hmm advanced Critique okay I can do that but dont hate me . The lighting is to dark and I've noticed some disproportions between the eyes. Also the space just above his upper lip is a bit to big making him look a bit unevolved. I love the detail though, you can clearly see you put a lot of work in this, but my advice would be to use a smudge stick (or blending stump ) to help you merge the lightened parts of his skin with the dark in a smoother way.
Its a grate job, especially just for a try ( it would take me forever to do that ... yeye for digital art). On a side not though and (I have to do this considering just how big of a geek I am and also a LP groupey )....*squeels* OMG its Mike ...! okay I'm done
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comitee In reply to kendji [2007-10-16 21:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your words
Yeah, I'm conscious of the dark tones and the disproportions. In fact, I don't like the result. But I wanted to upload it to receive critics to improve. So THANK YOU
Anyway, I think I've improved a little since I drew it (or at least, I wish!), so I wanna try to make it again, just to see how much I've improved
and.... YEEEEAHHH Mikeeeeeeee!!!!
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kendji In reply to comitee [2007-10-16 21:59:28 +0000 UTC]
Hey I'm glad I helped, you dont see many artists that actually want to hear criticism ( many of them are loco) In the DA forum a gilr ( I belive she was anyways) asked me to critique some stuff .... she went ape shit on my ass, I was like ..... "duuuhuuude ...."
, so I'm glad I helped out as best I could. It'l be grate if you did him again because ... ammm ... hey, its Mike .... he ...hot
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comitee In reply to kendji [2007-10-17 07:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I agree, and few people leaves worthy comments. A critic (positive or negative) is always good. But many people just leave a "fine" "beautiful" or so (and i sometimes do that)
But with that, you can't improve.
Ok, I'll try to find time to draw him again ^^
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kendji In reply to comitee [2007-10-17 11:01:52 +0000 UTC]
I know the feeling, sometimes its frustrating to read through them and realize that they dont carry any sort of significance rather than being polite, but when time is short ad you have like 39 deviations to go through I guess you pic your words by millage lmao
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comitee In reply to kendji [2007-10-17 15:04:14 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, but I didn't get the last part
could you explain it to me??
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kendji In reply to comitee [2007-10-17 15:39:54 +0000 UTC]
What I meant to say was, that they drop their comments through an eyedropper, just little bits and pieces of "Cool" "Nice" "Wow" without any true feedback
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