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computeruser28 — Free verse 01
Published: 2009-07-22 13:25:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Lonliness is not the end of the worldIt's a time to ponder
The one in a million chance
to reflect in peace
Amidst the bustling noise of the city
Too busy to think
Too busy to consider everything
We say, "If I could just turn back time..."
We know we can't.
But we still say it
If you could have the time
To look at yourself in the mirror,
Ask your doppelganger
"What happened to me?"
You will know the answer.
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wow that was short yet it gives the feeling of how we should look at ourselves from time to time to understand the actions that we make its like "think before you act"
loneliness here seems like a symbolism of contemplation rather than the loneliness which is sorrow am I right?
Well just edit the typo over there "Tto reflect in peace"
thats my only bad comment hahah ^^
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yes. that was the point of the poem, to prove that lonliness isn't a curse indicating your social failure
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