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Curled around alpine legs and caughtwithin hollows and inclines of pale skin,
she carries her endless winter always.
It settles upon frosted shoulders and
caps heavy-lidded eyes, clinging close to
the darkness of each snow-flecked breath;
lingering above cracked lips and the
remnants of a long forgotten warmth.
But darling, don't we deserve each other?
(She'd been Spring's child before Winter's whispers.)
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Comments: 34
autumnlit [2013-09-29 14:29:14 +0000 UTC]
Your lovely poetry has been featured here: fav.me/d6ogtjc
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blackdahlia911 [2012-08-29 22:23:57 +0000 UTC]
You have been featured here: [link]
Thank you for writing so beautifully and make sure to check out the other people's work!
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Concora In reply to blackdahlia911 [2012-08-30 07:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much! And, thank you for all of the favourites. You've truly made my day.
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pomohippie7 [2012-08-02 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Your wonderful work has been showcased here: [link]
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flawedfairytale [2012-07-05 16:53:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh. The language is just brilliant- such vivid images, 'settles upon frosted shoulders and caps heavy-lidded eyes' is really quite special.
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Concora In reply to flawedfairytale [2012-07-06 07:54:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, yet again! You leave such sweet feedback.
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WhisperedInsanity [2012-06-24 20:13:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. this is so magical and just.. amazing.
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ColoursOfHope [2012-06-19 12:06:43 +0000 UTC]
you are such a stunning poet. really really gifted.
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Concora In reply to ColoursOfHope [2012-06-21 07:28:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm floored. Thank you so much for such a magnificent compliment!
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CelestialMemories [2012-06-18 16:22:06 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely breathtaking...well done!
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Concora In reply to CelestialMemories [2012-06-18 23:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, my dear! I'm glad you like it. (:
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winterkate [2012-06-18 02:17:55 +0000 UTC]
This really caught my eye and held it. Stunning imagery, lovely theme.
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Concora In reply to winterkate [2012-06-18 09:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your kind comment!
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0hgravity [2012-06-17 19:06:16 +0000 UTC]
a nice piece. pleasant imagery and well-woven words.
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th3writer [2012-06-17 15:53:02 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely fantastic. You sound like a professional poet, I feel like I should be reading this in English class and analyzing it's meaning! Really, it's sooooooo good. (: I hope I continue to grow as a writer so I'm able to write like you
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Concora In reply to th3writer [2012-06-18 09:45:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow! Thank you for such lovely feedback - I really appreciate it.
You're a wonderful writer already!
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th3writer In reply to Concora [2012-06-18 15:06:48 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome dear And thanks so much
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Concora In reply to Lottie-Girl [2012-06-16 05:50:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you thought so, thank you.
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autumnlit [2012-06-16 02:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully done. I especially like the line in the parenthesis at the end. Perfect!
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Concora In reply to autumnlit [2012-06-16 03:28:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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