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Published: 2012-06-16 01:05:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1345; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 8
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Description Curled around alpine legs and caught
within hollows and inclines of pale skin,
she carries her endless winter always.

It settles upon frosted shoulders and
caps heavy-lidded eyes, clinging close to
the darkness of each snow-flecked breath;
lingering above cracked lips and the
remnants of a long forgotten warmth.

But darling, don't we deserve each other?

(She'd been Spring's child before Winter's whispers.)
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Comments: 34

autumnlit [2013-09-29 14:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Your lovely poetry has been featured here: fav.me/d6ogtjc

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Shannon-Sweeney [2012-08-31 18:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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Concora In reply to Shannon-Sweeney [2012-09-04 03:34:33 +0000 UTC]

!

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blackdahlia911 [2012-08-29 22:23:57 +0000 UTC]

You have been featured here: [link]
Thank you for writing so beautifully and make sure to check out the other people's work!

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Concora In reply to blackdahlia911 [2012-08-30 07:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you so much! And, thank you for all of the favourites. You've truly made my day.

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pomohippie7 [2012-08-02 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful work has been showcased here: [link]

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Concora In reply to pomohippie7 [2012-08-03 01:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, thank you!

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flawedfairytale [2012-07-05 16:53:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh. The language is just brilliant- such vivid images, 'settles upon frosted shoulders and caps heavy-lidded eyes' is really quite special.

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Concora In reply to flawedfairytale [2012-07-06 07:54:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yet again! You leave such sweet feedback.

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WhisperedInsanity [2012-06-24 20:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. this is so magical and just.. amazing.

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Concora In reply to WhisperedInsanity [2012-06-25 07:18:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ColoursOfHope [2012-06-19 12:06:43 +0000 UTC]

you are such a stunning poet. really really gifted.

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Concora In reply to ColoursOfHope [2012-06-21 07:28:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm floored. Thank you so much for such a magnificent compliment!

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CelestialMemories [2012-06-18 16:22:06 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely breathtaking...well done!

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Concora In reply to CelestialMemories [2012-06-18 23:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my dear! I'm glad you like it. (:

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winterkate [2012-06-18 02:17:55 +0000 UTC]

This really caught my eye and held it. Stunning imagery, lovely theme.

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Concora In reply to winterkate [2012-06-18 09:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your kind comment!

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winterkate In reply to Concora [2012-06-18 19:04:48 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome, anytime!

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0hgravity [2012-06-17 19:06:16 +0000 UTC]

a nice piece. pleasant imagery and well-woven words.

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Concora In reply to 0hgravity [2012-06-18 09:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. (:

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0hgravity In reply to Concora [2012-06-18 14:57:13 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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th3writer [2012-06-17 15:53:02 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely fantastic. You sound like a professional poet, I feel like I should be reading this in English class and analyzing it's meaning! Really, it's sooooooo good. (: I hope I continue to grow as a writer so I'm able to write like you

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Concora In reply to th3writer [2012-06-18 09:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow! Thank you for such lovely feedback - I really appreciate it.
You're a wonderful writer already!

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th3writer In reply to Concora [2012-06-18 15:06:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome dear And thanks so much

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Lottie-Girl [2012-06-16 04:17:40 +0000 UTC]

This is stunning, so powerful.

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Concora In reply to Lottie-Girl [2012-06-16 05:50:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you thought so, thank you.

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Lottie-Girl In reply to Concora [2012-06-16 22:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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autumnlit [2012-06-16 02:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done. I especially like the line in the parenthesis at the end. Perfect!

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Concora In reply to autumnlit [2012-06-16 03:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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autumnlit In reply to Concora [2012-06-16 21:38:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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featherback [2012-06-16 01:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely astounding <3

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Concora In reply to featherback [2012-06-16 01:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my dear.

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zwecat [2012-06-16 01:13:31 +0000 UTC]

This is just beautiful. I love it.

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Concora In reply to zwecat [2012-06-16 01:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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