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Why should we need each other?Why, when the wind sweeps the dust from the empty side of my bed, do I feel alone?
Why, when no one has ever lain in that place, should it feel so akwardly empty?
(Can you tell me?
Can anyone?)
(Will you tell me?
Will anyone?)
(Would you please tell me?
Would anyone please?)
(Tell me)
(Am I lost, or just alone?
Where are you?
Where is everyone?)
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Comments: 23
robincorinnewatts [2007-11-16 09:07:53 +0000 UTC]
kyle?
is that your name, haha, i was just reading comments,
and i'm guessing that it is.
well my name is robin.
and we have all felt this way before.
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xhailofbullets [2006-05-04 20:08:13 +0000 UTC]
I like the structure, but
awk. =\ hope you feel better/less alone asap.
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confusedRnormal In reply to xhailofbullets [2006-05-05 13:18:44 +0000 UTC]
thanks, i'm sorry about writing like this, my problems really aren't so bad; how are you?
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xhailofbullets In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-05-05 18:33:12 +0000 UTC]
and that was supposed to say "otherwise you might end up feeling worse or something." and ""
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xhailofbullets In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-05-05 18:30:43 +0000 UTC]
no dont be sorry, dear; best you write about it than keep it inside and whatnot, otherwise you feel end up feeling worse or something. i'm ok, things have been pretty hectic the past few days, had awful chest pains/migranes/insomnia, i think im going to be admitted to hospital on the mainland so they can asess me and stuff, it could be from like, one week to a few months, i really dont want to go, i mean theres nothing really wrong with me, it's just due to circumstances. bloody doctors. =\ you keeping ok then?
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confusedRnormal In reply to xhailofbullets [2006-05-06 22:16:25 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i kn what you mean... well, it is probably a good thing, i mean, what if something really is wrong? will you be able to take the laptop with? i mean, i'd hate for something to happen to you and not ever hear a thing about it! i hope it gets better for you!
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xhailofbullets In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-05-06 22:28:23 +0000 UTC]
neh, i dont think they'd allow me to bring my laptop with me. they might have internet access or whatever there, but i doubt id be allowed to use it, im supposed to be under 24 hour strict surveillance or some crap like that. its not just for the physical side of things, ysee, but i can talk to you about that later iuw. and i doubt theres really anything all that wrong, so no worries there. im supposed to be going on monday, but im testing out new meds atm, so things might brighten up before then anyhoo, there may be no need, i'll try keep in touch though - if i do go.
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confusedRnormal In reply to xhailofbullets [2006-05-07 00:17:38 +0000 UTC]
oh, okies, yeah, when are you on these days? i am done with this semester of university, so, i can be on to talk whenever. just let me know, i'd be glad to talk about anything, period. so, yeah, jus' let me know.
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xhailofbullets In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-05-07 16:47:55 +0000 UTC]
i'll be on pretty much all of tonight from 11 my time i think, so i'll prolly catch you sometime then if your on.
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SenselessDancer [2006-04-27 01:42:59 +0000 UTC]
Such a romantic you are, a cynical romantic, but then I suppose all romantics are. The message eats at your heart, Kyle, and leaves you with the type of pain and longing one would experience with loss...however that could be my still bleeding heart talking. It is very good, as always! Bravo!
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confusedRnormal In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-04-27 19:53:50 +0000 UTC]
AIMEE!! omg, omfg! that comment had hints in it, hints of the kind of poetry that i knew you could wriite, the kind more personal, and less cold and isolated, less vague-symbolic, the kind... that i maybe just thought i saw, now i'm not certain. implied relationships, i think, are what i like. not just symbolism, but emotional meaning... i think my train of thought jumped the track a while back, so i'll just leave figuring this mess out to you.
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SenselessDancer In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-04-29 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks...I could follow some of it. But then...you lost me. lol. Check out my new poem and tell me what you think. I think it has more symbolism of the type you like, the implied, or blantent relationship type...the more personal side of me.
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confusedRnormal In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-04-29 21:09:59 +0000 UTC]
oooOoOoOooo! i will!
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SenselessDancer In reply to confusedRnormal [2006-04-29 22:39:39 +0000 UTC]
lol. Ok. Can't wait!
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ashellessmind [2006-04-25 22:08:28 +0000 UTC]
Questions that only prompt more questions, I'm afraid.
You've asked thing that'll make people curious, but they'll never have answers for you.
The best I can do is say 'human nature' and we all know thats as shitty an answer as shitty answers get.
Its a pretty cool piece though, man.
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confusedRnormal In reply to ashellessmind [2006-04-26 23:49:17 +0000 UTC]
I hate to pull the "I-don't-have-time-for-you-one-word-reply,"
so i did this instead.
thanks
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MissAudreyKaye [2006-04-25 19:05:18 +0000 UTC]
For some reason, we humans are made for companionship.
It is cruel.
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caramelapplecorpse [2006-04-25 18:49:20 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much, I'm sorry you're feeling so lonely though
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confusedRnormal In reply to caramelapplecorpse [2006-04-26 10:21:43 +0000 UTC]
i like this one myself
(thank you very much for the :fav: too!)
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confusedRnormal In reply to caramelapplecorpse [2006-04-26 10:20:25 +0000 UTC]
getting this many comments on my piece so quickly makes me feel a bit more loved
^_^
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panicked [2006-04-25 18:46:43 +0000 UTC]
It's really good.
But, it's sad!
Why are you sad? =[
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cuatfrannys [2006-04-25 15:54:01 +0000 UTC]
Kyle, kyle, kyle...
whats wrong? gee well i like it, but you know you're not alone! i'm always there even if it's over 10 thousand miles.
love you!!!!!!!
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confusedRnormal In reply to cuatfrannys [2006-04-26 10:22:57 +0000 UTC]
I know, franny, i'm just a bit lonely.
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