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CoolNala — Doing It For All Their Fans by-sa

Published: 2011-06-27 19:52:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2898; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 12
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Description The fans wanted it, especially the event coordinator's son, whose two favorite Pokemon are Absol and Lucario. While they maybe doing this for fun, the two Pokemon are acting like this total war. In this pic, Lucario is biting Absol's (insert proper word here), and Absol's not happy about it at all.

The Japanese symbol in the background is "hitokuchi," which means bite or mouthful.
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coolsarahkry [2011-06-27 23:27:01 +0000 UTC]

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First off, I love the exciting armor you put on all your poke-fights. It is very colorful and vivid which is what makes me click on a deviation. I can, however, see some problem. First off, the cresent thing lucario is biting...Lucario's jaw should be more open so it looks like he is actually grasping the cresent horn. You should also be able to see the edge of his mouth under the cresent horn thing.
The lighting also is a bit strange. The light on the pokemon seems to be coming from the top left corner of them, but the fire is close to the ground. It seems that the light should be coming from the lower back, not the upper left.
Also, lucarios paw on top of absol seems very flat. To make it have volume you should make the edge go off of the absol's helmet,in front of the lucario's spike.(if this is confusing tell me and I shall fix it and post it to photoshop)
The shadow on that spike is also strange. If the light was from the upper left corner then the shadow should be on the right. The same problem seems to be with the other wrist spike. Remember,the spikes are round, not flat. The correct placement of shadows will make it look better.

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CoolNala In reply to coolsarahkry [2011-06-27 23:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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coolsarahkry In reply to CoolNala [2011-06-28 00:15:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Was it helpful? I just got premium membership so if you want you can critique it.[link]

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CoolNala In reply to coolsarahkry [2011-06-28 14:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes. It was. Except, I think I'll leave the picture as is.

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Shiron-Windragon [2011-06-30 19:05:40 +0000 UTC]

nice job. Lucario vs absol FTW...... lucario would win hands down

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Yamashita-akaDoragon [2011-06-30 15:03:06 +0000 UTC]

I call that thing on Absol's forehead sword.

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Elicario [2011-06-27 20:49:54 +0000 UTC]

sweet!!

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Moondrao32 [2011-06-27 19:53:51 +0000 UTC]

You forgot of Lucario's 'aura' sensors.

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CoolNala In reply to Moondrao32 [2011-06-27 20:15:54 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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Moondrao32 In reply to CoolNala [2011-06-27 20:39:26 +0000 UTC]

The black thingies sticking out of the back of his head. I think It's giant balls of hair or something?

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Kaile1 In reply to Moondrao32 [2012-01-20 17:46:06 +0000 UTC]

it's his horn/blade

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Moondrao32 In reply to Kaile1 [2012-01-23 12:33:37 +0000 UTC]

Kay.

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CoolNala In reply to Moondrao32 [2011-06-27 20:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Whoops. Just a minute.

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