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Published: 2006-05-17 20:12:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description When everything disintegrates
Only dust remains true
And your fictional empire
Is nothing but naught
As your moanings keep on echoing
They keep on fleeing like lepers
Mentally retarded, socially unborn
The ultimate "persona non grata"-ism!
Poser, coward to name but a few
You passed years ago, shameful
Get stigmatized!
Win a prophecy!
Get another sense!
Win a holocaust!
As the smoke clears up
All you feel is nothing
This is all so tempting
That you feel like leaving
When your muse is dead
You begin to experience life
With a scar in your mind
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corpsefire - Heartfelt
Comments: 4

bluephoenixrising [2006-05-25 10:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant imagery I found "As the smoke clears up/All you feel is nothing" interesting - usually when things clear up you start to feel them again, so it was a nice twist - some excellent reversals in there!

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corpsefire In reply to bluephoenixrising [2006-05-25 23:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Thk you dear! Always good to get some constructive criticism!

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bluephoenixrising In reply to corpsefire [2006-05-26 07:37:51 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome i felt i needed to say something more intelligent than just "cool"!

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corpsefire In reply to bluephoenixrising [2006-05-26 17:11:21 +0000 UTC]

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