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Published: 2007-02-14 23:35:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Do you remember that timewhen you were so young & tender
You used to elude me
with all those losers around you
I thought I could never be your man
I was scorned because of you
but that never affected my will
for my love was stronger
& the bound I was offering was greater
How the times have changed my dear
now you're but a puppet in my nimble hands
I admire your fidelity to my commands
I kinda miss the old days though
when your flesh was still alive & fresh
Now you can barely make me move
with those lurid dances of yours
Oh pretty darling!
how I miss you breathing!
When those hooks found flesh to clinge to
& I could violate something more alive
than just a screaming fading memory
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Comments: 15
Al-Is-In-Chains [2007-02-16 20:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Twisted valentines almost make the damn holiday worth it...
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br0ken-heart [2007-02-16 06:55:09 +0000 UTC]
Passionate, obsessive, morbid and sorrowful.
Fucking superb. You are gifted in your craft, Omar.
I read it three times. I love the way you spin a tale.....
I know a certain bastard friend of yours that should take the time to read your work - at least once in his lifetime. He hasn't a clue what he's missing, obviously.
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corpsefire In reply to br0ken-heart [2007-02-19 10:57:59 +0000 UTC]
Thx dear, it's really a pleasure to know that you like what I do
& concerning this certain bastard friend of ours I guess he's usually busier reading what someone else writes
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br0ken-heart In reply to corpsefire [2007-02-19 20:37:25 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha..... who might you be referring to?????
And yes, Omar. I love your work - what you do is exceptional. I have not even read all of your material, though I have every intention of doing so as you are the proverbial "needle in a haystack" as far as writers go on this site. You are very talented and I have the utmost respect for you. It's sad that writers get so little exposure in this community.
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corpsefire In reply to br0ken-heart [2007-02-20 12:11:21 +0000 UTC]
I am at loss for words...
THANK YOU!
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akasha-goddess [2007-02-15 11:39:05 +0000 UTC]
looks like we both had a comeback at the same time
i love it babe great job
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corpsefire In reply to akasha-goddess [2007-02-16 01:04:52 +0000 UTC]
Thx Jess
Glad you liked it & thx for the
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FOXOHSEVEN [2007-02-14 23:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant work as always bro, absolutely awesome!
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corpsefire In reply to FOXOHSEVEN [2007-02-15 00:27:51 +0000 UTC]
Always happy to see you, your support is more than welcomed !
Thx for the man!
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