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Published: 2005-12-10 22:55:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 509; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 5
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Description As I lay moaning on your putrid carcass
steadily braiding your limbs together
creating this ugly portrait of yours
I admit I'm the weakest of all
I can barely breath here alongside you
feel me if just for Hell's sake
see the scars? they're just me
each one is another me
trapped within this flesh of yours
yeah! I'm sick & perverted
but I'm the one standing tall
shedding your frail skin
like I did countless times before
& each time I wept you
bloody intoxicating love of mine
Yes! that's me flowing
each & every me !
to this abyss you called me
messy creature of carnal blight
Bless you dear one
for I always found you there
lying,motionless,watchful
You graceful thing
entwined inside is the last me
strangling for life
tearing at what you call Light
IT'S NUMB,IT'S DEAF & IT NO LONGER HEEDS!
Ruler divine of me!
I spit upon this unworthy soil
I curse this hostile place
I always return with a grin & a bleeding me
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Comments: 19

Hera666 [2007-01-26 10:06:24 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING

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corpsefire In reply to Hera666 [2007-01-26 15:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Thx

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akasha-goddess [2006-11-27 12:48:05 +0000 UTC]

i been sittin infront of the screen lookin like this-> for the past minute tryin to think of how to tell u how great this is!!! all i can think bout is this is freakin amazin!!!

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corpsefire In reply to akasha-goddess [2006-11-28 16:46:58 +0000 UTC]

believe me darl you've reached your goal...
I am extremly thankful for this beautiful comment

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akasha-goddess In reply to corpsefire [2006-11-28 19:19:21 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!

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Al-Is-In-Chains [2006-09-13 13:06:33 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of my relationships

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corpsefire In reply to Al-Is-In-Chains [2006-09-13 18:51:02 +0000 UTC]

ha ! We are sad excuses for humans...

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eldawand [2006-09-02 18:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I really like this one

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corpsefire In reply to eldawand [2006-09-03 01:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart

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angelsarefascists [2005-12-12 17:26:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you submitted more of your work. It was very nice getting the cahnce to read it.

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corpsefire In reply to angelsarefascists [2005-12-13 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my dear

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angelsarefascists In reply to corpsefire [2005-12-13 03:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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corpsefire In reply to angelsarefascists [2005-12-13 16:34:15 +0000 UTC]

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invayne666 [2005-12-11 22:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooo! Awesome. These would make great lyrics for a death metal band.

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corpsefire In reply to invayne666 [2005-12-11 23:05:09 +0000 UTC]

thx my dear! Hopefully I'd be the one spitting them out...
hmmm...semi-romantic death metal band...

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invayne666 In reply to corpsefire [2005-12-11 23:14:12 +0000 UTC]

Oooo...that'd be awesome.

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corpsefire In reply to invayne666 [2005-12-12 00:42:30 +0000 UTC]

I'd even sign some cds for you my dear

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Adaae [2005-12-11 16:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Wauw i love it....

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corpsefire In reply to Adaae [2005-12-11 17:10:37 +0000 UTC]

I love you too sweetheart thx !

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