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corpsefire — Serenade/Back off
Published: 2005-10-25 23:32:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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you buried me alive
through your non ending backstabbing
but i breath spears
n i'm as merciful as yourself
forsaking all your hopes
in a suicidal final act
our frenzies met
& ended only in tattered pieces
of a so-called life  
let me complete your pain
let me add the razor-sharp marks
the moving line of your dead eyes
you did all i held as a sacrilege
you punished all my virtues
by your disbeleiving heart
let me feel you close
draw your  gracious outline
with your bloody claws
darling,im afraid to say,
you were beautiful when you were alive
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Comments: 6

ImMoRaL-AnGeL [2005-11-04 13:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Love it great piece !! one of my faves now !!

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corpsefire In reply to ImMoRaL-AnGeL [2005-11-04 22:59:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks sweetheart

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ImMoRaL-AnGeL In reply to corpsefire [2005-11-06 14:18:20 +0000 UTC]

ur most welcum

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ImMoRaL-AnGeL [2005-11-04 13:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Love it great piece !! one of my faves now !!

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invayne666 [2005-11-01 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Omar this is wonderful! I love hthe last line. It smacks you right accross the face.

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corpsefire In reply to invayne666 [2005-11-02 03:15:47 +0000 UTC]

*flattered & hides away* thank you for the kind words

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