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Published: 2006-12-27 19:53:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Clipping wings isn't fun
Won't fly higher than a junkie
Your feathers stain the place
& you get insulted beyond belief
Do you enjoy clipping wings?
I get mine torn away a lot
The scars they manage to heal
Sometimes too fast for my taste
Never enough time to draw
& the beauty of it just fades
Do you enjoy clipping wings?
Last time you stumbled beneath
the Kitten lapped its jaws
You were gonna live happily retarded
if it wasn't for those dead wings
Do you enjoy clipping wings?
I got my own shirt of feathers
100% genuine,blood-free ones
I use it to hide away in my pride
For I am above all dead jaybirds
Do you enjoy clipping wings?
You look above you & vomit forth
What's so beautiful about a sky
beholding atrocities & dead birds
Never finding more a suitable grave
Than the bowels of some fiery place?
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Comments: 15

Blombi [2007-01-21 23:31:17 +0000 UTC]

this is great stuff

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corpsefire In reply to Blombi [2007-01-22 02:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Thx for the comment & the !

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FOXOHSEVEN [2006-12-28 12:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice work bro, looking forward to more..

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corpsefire In reply to FOXOHSEVEN [2006-12-28 13:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you severus, your comments are always welcomed

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br0ken-heart [2006-12-27 22:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Omar,
I have to say this is one of your best works. I think you have revealed something more raw and personal in this piece than you have done in your previous works. This is deep and provocative. Excellent job.

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corpsefire In reply to br0ken-heart [2006-12-28 13:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Thx Shelly , always a pleasure to please Hard Hand

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akasha-goddess [2006-12-27 21:29:27 +0000 UTC]


i really really like it
especially this part " got my own shirt of feathers
100% genuine,blood-free ones
I use it to hide away in my pride"
nice

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corpsefire In reply to akasha-goddess [2006-12-28 13:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Jessie you never fail to flatter me

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akasha-goddess In reply to corpsefire [2006-12-28 20:39:43 +0000 UTC]

i jus speak my mind

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corpsefire In reply to akasha-goddess [2006-12-29 11:54:38 +0000 UTC]

That's why you're a babe

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akasha-goddess In reply to corpsefire [2006-12-29 12:39:31 +0000 UTC]

hehhehe thanx

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corpsefire In reply to akasha-goddess [2006-12-30 00:08:58 +0000 UTC]

You seriously need to stop "hehe"ing all the time Jessie !

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akasha-goddess In reply to corpsefire [2006-12-30 16:18:00 +0000 UTC]

fine

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alliiuu [2006-12-27 21:23:51 +0000 UTC]

wooooooooooowww!!!seriously..I AM SPEECHLESS!!! this is just awesome!!!great job

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corpsefire In reply to alliiuu [2006-12-28 13:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Thx darl
Glad you liked it!

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