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Pretty weird concept, I guess; I don't know if anyone thought of anything like it, but it popped into my head while musing over Syndrome (which is a lot of the time).Well, what happens in the story is that when the Supers came back, there's a group of people who really hate them. The Anti Super Association (WAS going to be Anti-super society, but that would make their acronym ASS, and as funny as that is, it wouldn't fit *laughs*). Well, they're gaining more power, and even though the supers are told not to worry, everyone is always afraid of encountering them. After a while, supers begin disappearing again, and though Mr. Incredible is quick to blame Syndrome, who survived and had rebuilt his empire after convincing the courts that he was crazy at the time of his murders, the rest of the world is convinced that it's ASA radicals.
After Violet gets kidnapped, she finds out that it's actually both of them working together. You'll find out, if I ever decide to write it.
ANYWAY, the pictures are showing how I portrayed Syndrome in my mind. Basically, things weren't easy for him after the accident. He totally lost a lot and went cyborg; after all that's happened to him, I suspected a lot of bodily damage, really. Yes, I designed the robot arm. I am no good at that stuff. He lost an arm and an eye, and he has a lot of nerve damage that both puts him in pain and cuts him off from feeling. It's really weird and sad and creepy at once.
The stasis chamber is something that Syndrome uses now to keep the Supers from attacking. It's sort of like an induced coma. There's a bit in the story that the girl supers are sort of being forced into rape because of a chemical that some guards put into the liquid that induces... well, I'll stop talking. It's really twisted stuff, I guess. *laughs*
ANYWAY, I might write it someday. It's really interesting me.
Incredibles (c) Disney, Pixar
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buddy should have been in incredibles 2. Idk that movie was good but not so much near the end I think. Part of it felt really off.
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It might be an old picture, but it's still a good one, and I like the concept of things becoming much darker after the movie. I played around with my own idea of this kind of plot, where Syndrome and an anti-super group join up to accomplish their mutual goals. It's later revealed that it was a group like the ASA who first employed and gave Buddy the chance to put his genius to an end they both wanted, who now have the technology he developed which, it's also learned was developed by studying Supers using their powers during 'experiments'. The ASA even has members in the government, thus why no supers were warned when Buddy began killing them off as his plans entered its final stage, thus why the story argues nothing has happened in the past few years since Syndrome 'died'.
There's no Synlet in my story, though, and the fact that Buddy is alive is never known to the Parrs. When Violet is kidnapped, she's only one of two supers at the secret facility, the other being called 'Subject Alpha' by the staff who treat both Alpha and her as test subjects with Syndrome handling all the torture (psychological and emotional more than physical), with a focus on Violet. When not being poked and prodded, Violet and Alpha are kept in a small bathroom-tiled room the size of a janitor's closet with nothing in it, not even light, eventually causing Violet to feel safer in the dark than in the light, like Alpha has already been conditioned. Violet also learns that Alpha is how she's being prevented from escaping; if she tries to get away, he's the one that will bring her back; however, if she's disobedient and doesn't do what she's told, Alpha is the one that gets 'punished', which she is forced to watch, and often perform, her powers being controlled so she uses them against him, like his are against her whenever she tries to escape. And things only get worse for the pair from there.
The relationship in the story comes from Violet and Alpha, whose name she eventually learns is Dedric, which takes her a lot of effort to draw out as he's long forgotten much of his past; heavily encouraged to when his father, Buddy, cut out his tongue, unable to take hearing being called "Dad" by "a monster" any longer. Violet also learns Dedric is telepathic, inherited from his Super mother, whom neither of them know anymore (she's theorized to by Psy-Rin near the end of the story, who had telepathic powers). Violet/Dedric's relationship comes from Violet doing what she can to restore his humanity while preserving her own, while Dedric helps her to simply survive and manipulate her powers in new ways like their captors want, like him and his psychic abilities. And Violet knows this is part of the ASA and Syndrome's plan; depriving and making them obedient enough that they feel nothing when commanded to kill, but keeping them human enough so they care about one another and keep them in line.
Eventually Violet and Dedric do escape and she returns to her family, but don't recall what I planned much past that. I know the whole thing focused around a different kind of corruption outside the usual; Synlets I've read usually have either Syndrome going good or Violet turning evil, but my goal with this story was to have Violet and Dedric become so twisted that not only does good and evil not exist in their worlds anymore, it doesn't even apply to them directly. They are too apathetic and skeptical to ever be good or heroes, yet too withdrawn and sedated to ever be evil or villains; yet also too defiant against any kind of authority figure that they can't be allowed to be left as independent agents, their great power demanded to be controlled by the government superiors who Violet's parents operate under...or are weapons to, just like Syndrome and the ASA wanted to do with Violet and Dedric. I remember the whole situation at the end-story stage was supposed to lead to some massive cluster-fk, but I can't recall how I had thought about going about it or what the outcome would be.
I wish I had more free time. Damn real world and all its requirements.
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I just wanted to say your concept for the unlikely chance that buddy survived is so original and cool. I hope they do something like this in incredibles 2.
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It's been 10 years since you drew this, and I'm like too late, 15 10 years too late. LOL
This fanart got me into the Synlet ship, so thank you
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This is a very interesting concept for Syndrome, and what I think would be a wonderful idea for a fic. I hope you do end up writing it! I'd love to read something like this.
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God, it's brilliant!! How you written the story yet??
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ahhhhhhh
so goood
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AHHH! DX Now I feel like I'm a plagiarist!!! ...Is that the word? ANYWAY! In my incerdibles fanfic, I had Buddy with a robotic arm as well, but, not the scar on his face...nice touch by the way! LOL Guess I gotta work something else out...he's gotta be seriously messed up, but I don't wanna steal your idea...brilliant as it is! You think Buddy would be equally sexy in a wheelchair?
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Heh...that seems to be the standard in most fics these days. He has a cybernetic arm in my sick and twisted fic on FFN.
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I'd love to read that! It sounds really intereting.
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DO IT DO IT DO TI DO TI!!!!!!!!
*foams at the mouth* *drops down of the floor and starts having a twitching spasam*
YOU HAVE TONS OF GOOD SYNLET IDEAS!!!!!!! DON'T TORTURE ME LIKE THIS!!!!!
Or do you like torturing me? You're cruel....
*picks herself up* *walks out of the room to prevent any more embaressment* *trips and falls on face* Well... some much for that idea...
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actually no... *laughs*
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I loved that line "You can't get sucked into a jet turbine and expect to come out in the same shape as you went in"
haha I love Syndrome here. I like him without the makeup 
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You are evil XD Becouse of you works I become Synlet fan! XD
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If you ever started this, I would read it in a heartbeat. ^_^
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i know you've had this question about a million times but have you started this yet?
is sounds really cool
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MUST...READ...FIC...
(I'd kill for good fanfiction)
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I really like this idea, I was watching the Incredibles today with my husband and he even mentioned that syndrome shouldn't have died. He said wouldn't be cool if he survived somehow and had to be rebuilt ala the 10 million dollar man. And then I remembered this picture and wondered if you'd started this. If not, don't let it go to waste, it's a good idea!
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No, I haven't started it yet. *laughs* I'm still thinking about this idea, because I actually really liked it, but I'm working on Incrediboy vs. Incredigirl right now; maybe after that. *laughs* I'm not dropping it, don't worry.
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I know you did this a long time ago, but I would really like to see a follow up to it. Have you created one? Or am I merely out of luck? Syndrome's arm is incredible (no pun intended) and it seems really in character. I love it.
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Thanks!
I haven't really done a follow up on it, really... I was planning on writing the fic, but I didn't get back to it because of all these other ideas and then the fact that I'm still writing another incredific and all this stuff is in the way... *laughs*
I like the idea though. It's kind of on the backburner until later on.
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Being the crazy fangirl I am, I'm going to have to query on whether or not you have a fanfiction.com account, if this fanfic is on that site. Or is it on DA?
Sorry for my craziness, it's hard to find good Synlet out there, I've discovered.
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Um, the fanfic is on fanfiction.net, in the Incredibles section...
it's not exactly Synlet. *laughs* it's a story about Violet getting warped back in time to when Buddy was still a kid. Sort of a friendship story between seven/eight year old Buddy and Violet.
BUT if you want to read it anyway, it's called "Incrediboy vs. Incredigirl." *laughs*
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I blame you for starting this horrible romanticizing of syndrome... you make him look so hot when you draw.
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Um... sorry? Gahahahahaha
And yet, I haven't made him anime or minimized his chin. *laughs* ...like some people I can mention. *grumbles*
The haircut bit started because of a comic for a fanfic someone was writing, and I just kept up with it because it's easier to draw. But seriously, I just started drawing him half a year ago. Other people have been trying to make him look pretty before I even decided to touch the guy. gahahahaha
And yet, I take it as a semi-compliment. *laughs* Thank you
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Well I thought he was okay looking before, even if he was short and a little nutty. You just draw him so handsome<3
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Shameless Plug shameless plug!!!
I know, pretty blunt of me, but that's what it was! Shameless plug!!!
anyway, yeah, I like Syndrome with his hair differently too, but more for the "easier to draw" reason. Both ways are good.
*coughs shameless plug coughs*
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I always thought he'd look nice with a trim and his hair swept back.
Or maybe bangs.
I am all about Handsome!Syn.
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Woah, this is amazing... Im so interested now. You gotta link to the fic?
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Oh, sorry. I didnt read the descrip till just now. Well, hope you write it, sounds really good!
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It sounds like an uber-awesome idea. I fully endorse this fanfic's writage.
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sounds pretty cool, i'd definately read itXD
the concepts are really cool as well. i like the one of Violet touching his face. for some reason it seems sweetXD
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Hey, its kinda like Terminator, sorta not... lol. That's the only cyborg movie I can think of!
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*laughs* It's not really cyborgian to that extent. Basically, he's cyborg in that he's got mechanical pieces replacing his eye and arm and also because of some wiring he's had attaching his brain to several muscles in his face and into the mechanical arm so that he's able to control them subconsciously as if they were still attached to him... think more... Silver from Treasure Planet. Though, I don't think a lot of people watched that *laughs*. Um... maybe... Ed Elric from Full Metal Alchemist. Except Syndrome's more F***ed up because of it. Cuz, guess who he blames for it all? *laughs*
Gah, i think that if I do write it, it'll be one of the more darker and more perverted ideas I've had... *laughs* The majority of it, Violet's half-naked, and there's this one scene that played out in my head.... GAH. I'll have to fix that and figure out how to tame it. *laughs* If I ever get to it.
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omg! i wanna read this so bad! please write it it sounds awesome! i love dark and twisted stuff.
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Sounds like a very twisted Synlet to me.
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I'd read it.
Damn you, you got me interested in Incredibles fic.
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GAHAHAHAHA! I'm happy. And horrible, I guess, but happy. *laughs*
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Hey, the best way of showing your love is to beat the everloving shit out of 'em.
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