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Daily Lit Deviations for August 3rd, 2011
We are proud to feature today's Daily Literature Deviations!
You can show your support by ing this News Article.
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We will include you and your piece in a special recognition news article.

Poetry

Featured by bowie-loon123
FirstsI had sex
for the first time
on a Sunday
when
October air
ate away the blinds
and snake-lines of light
pressed in
at undone corners.

I remember less of you,
and more of me,
cocooned
in yellow sheets
how you kept mumbling
questions and I
lay there,
still.

The prodding,
the jostle,
are so much less vivid
than the sense
that I was shedding
skin
becoming something,
tighter,
slimmer,
more stream-lined.

So that later
in the bathroom,
I saw myself,
the mirror
twisting my hipbones
into
shelves that I could
rest my elbows on.

I was nineteen
then,
so you,
two times my weight,
welding my bones
into yours,
made
Firsts by ejectionletter

This is probably the most tasteful, realistic
and universal sex poem I have ever encountered.
ejectionletter makes no effort to conceal the
subject, but presents it in a way that is light and
easy to digest. Though describing the act itself,
the emotions are melded together nicely

Featured by spoems
:thumb245316036:
Rotten apples by JenniferCrane

This poem drapes a dark mood over the scene
with deeply etched and gorgeous lines, while a bleak
message surfaces like a magic 8 ball answer regarding
humanity.

Featured by apple-dark
       polish.you're cracking apart
all of my bones
thinking that i've hidden
the love that you think
you deserve from me
somewhere you can't
steal it easily.

you've got your greedy
fingers squeezing
my choking heart
while you scrub it
with an old dishcloth
polsihing it so at least
it looks useful.

my toes are curled
and goosebumps erupt
and you continue to pick
me apart searching for
something that once
might have existed but
you destroyed by yourself.
        polish. by ohsparrowsong

This poem is full of great imagery and has a
sound concept.  I love the idea of this very physical
search for love and where it may be hidden.

Prose

Featured by: Kitri-du-Lac
:thumb207686188:
"Shakily" by Zcreative
The intriguing point of this letter is in
the curious and ambigous writer 'the editor'.
Combined with the opening phrase and continued
images of confusion and self-doubt, it illustrates
a very interesting representation of personal examination.

Featured by SilverInkblot / theWrittenRevolution
:thumb245458865:

The Carpenter and the Lady
by cyranosdemet
This short story roped me in immediately and
held my attention all the way through to the nice
little twist at the end.

For more information, including how to suggest a Deviation
to be featured, please visit us at *DailyLitDeviations.

Thanks so much for supporting the lit community and this project!

~ The *DailyLitDeviations Team ~

Prepared by: Ebahr

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Daily Lit Deviations for August 3rd, 2011
We are proud to feature today's Daily Literature Deviations!
You can show your support by ing this News Article.
Please comment and the features and congratulate the artists!

For all of the featured artists: If you receive a DD for one
of your pieces featured by DLD please note damina .
We will include you and your piece in a special recognition news article.

Poetry

Featured by bowie-loon123
FirstsI had sex
for the first time
on a Sunday
when
October air
ate away the blinds
and snake-lines of light
pressed in
at undone corners.

I remember less of you,
and more of me,
cocooned
in yellow sheets
how you kept mumbling
questions and I
lay there,
still.

The prodding,
the jostle,
are so much less vivid
than the sense
that I was shedding
skin
becoming something,
tighter,
slimmer,
more stream-lined.

So that later
in the bathroom,
I saw myself,
the mirror
twisting my hipbones
into
shelves that I could
rest my elbows on.

I was nineteen
then,
so you,
two times my weight,
welding my bones
into yours,
made
Firsts by ejectionletter

This is probably the most tasteful, realistic
and universal sex poem I have ever encountered.
ejectionletter makes no effort to conceal the
subject, but presents it in a way that is light and
easy to digest. Though describing the act itself,
the emotions are melded together nicely

Featured by spoems
:thumb245316036:
Rotten apples by JenniferCrane

This poem drapes a dark mood over the scene
with deeply etched and gorgeous lines, while a bleak
message surfaces like a magic 8 ball answer regarding
humanity.

Featured by apple-dark
       polish.you're cracking apart
all of my bones
thinking that i've hidden
the love that you think
you deserve from me
somewhere you can't
steal it easily.

you've got your greedy
fingers squeezing
my choking heart
while you scrub it
with an old dishcloth
polsihing it so at least
it looks useful.

my toes are curled
and goosebumps erupt
and you continue to pick
me apart searching for
something that once
might have existed but
you destroyed by yourself.
        polish. by ohsparrowsong

This poem is full of great imagery and has a
sound concept.  I love the idea of this very physical
search for love and where it may be hidden.

Prose

Featured by: Kitri-du-Lac
:thumb207686188:
"Shakily" by Zcreative
The intriguing point of this letter is in
the curious and ambigous writer 'the editor'.
Combined with the opening phrase and continued
images of confusion and self-doubt, it illustrates
a very interesting representation of personal examination.

Featured by SilverInkblot / theWrittenRevolution
:thumb245458865:

The Carpenter and the Lady
by cyranosdemet
This short story roped me in immediately and
held my attention all the way through to the nice
little twist at the end.

For more information, including how to suggest a Deviation
to be featured, please visit us at *DailyLitDeviations.

Thanks so much for supporting the lit community and this project!

~ The *DailyLitDeviations Team ~

Prepared by: Ebahr