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Published: 2007-12-05 17:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 2805; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 24
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I was really torn between two shots and which one I should upload, so decided to upload both, ask you, and then scrap one of them!!!!!
This one is the first.
Second is here ----> [link]
At Chalkis' castle, for my university's last project. I see it like something between emotive and fashion portrait, but decided to upload it here since it's fashion project I took those photos for.
Model: Helen
Photo+Edit: me
Please critique to help me improve myself!
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Lovely shot! The composition and angle you shot it at is lovely. The only thing I can think to critique has already been addressed(zooming out to capture a bit more sky and her feet), so other than that, I think it's wonderful.
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Thank you very much for your comment! Yeah, it's one of those mistakes I'm trying really hard to stop doing even nowadays!!
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Xairomai pou sou arese!
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exw megalwsei sto kastro tou karababa sthn xalkida...
Xairomai pou anaviwnei toso kallitexnika, giati h omorfia tou to axizei.
Sygxarhthria dancingelf.
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Exeis megalwsei sto kastro?? Ma kala, poso xronwn eisai????
Euxaristw polu!
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This one is a lot better for fashion ^_^
Great picture! 
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Thanks a lot! I think so too!
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You are welcome dear 
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Euxaristw! 
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Δεν αναφέρω το σχετικό με το δέντρο γιατί με κάλυψαν οι προλαλήσαντες.
Και-μια μικρή λεπτομέρεια που πρόσεξα τώρα, θα μπορούσες να δοκιμάσεις να "φτιάξεις" λίγο και το πράσινο κάτω ώστε να μοιάζει πιό φυσικό (ήταν μοκέτα αν δεν κάνω λάθος
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nai, moketa htan (poios 'empneusmenos' an8rwpos thn ebale ekei?
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I much prefer the composition of this one, though hr expression is beter in the other. I like the tilted frame and the inclusion of the sky. I think that splash of blue sets off the yellow/brown of the rest of the picture well. Personally I would have zoomed out some more to include her foot and more of the second doorway beyond, and perhaps got a little lowerfor a bit more sky.
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Yeah, I see what you mean! Can't believe myself I cut off her foot!!! :S I think this one is a tiny bit better because it includes the whole dress too!
Thanks a lot for sharing your opinion!
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ti photo-edit ekanes se autes tis photo? desaturated a bit?
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Elafru desaturate kai smoothened the skin. Elaxisto dodge sto proswpo ths. Auta.
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little can be said, wonderful image!
since you asked for it, though, you could have not cropped her foot, but you could have cropped some of the sky and definitely the tree.
my two cents...
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Yeah, I see what you mean mate. Thanks!
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