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Published: 2012-02-01 16:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Free-fall is exhilarating, exhilaration, and final.
The ground rushes up to meet you like a long lost lover and you kiss with broken lips.
Staring at the sky and seeing so many patterns it's like all the pieces to a puzzle in your hand.
Rhythmic beating in your ears, and you wonder vaguely if it's your heart or your music. If only we had wings and flight was true...
Sitting to the side and finding that light can dance and we are all just a bundle of nerves and piss.
Electric hate and poisonous vibes are enough to choke, and so you're gone and gone deep into your liquid comfort. It's a soothing burn, but you still cough, and somehow that makes it better.
You're going to win, it doesn't matter what it takes because he's watching, and you need to impress him. Must. Even though it's tricky ground because his sister is there, and she is cute. Still, you're going to win.
Merging nights, and bleary days, how many have passed so far? It's hot and you're young but smart and not getting it right. They still look at you wrong and it's acid. Doesn't matter though, you'll show them that you can do it just like them, or even better.
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Comments: 4

sh3rryb3ar [2012-02-02 04:07:59 +0000 UTC]

"Rhythmic beating in your ears, and you wonder vaguely if it's your heart or your music." ...my favorite part

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dancingtrees In reply to sh3rryb3ar [2012-02-02 04:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I don't feel I did it justice though, somehow. There's tons of empty places, and the writing is stiff...
I'm glad you liked it though.

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Lovely-Madness-13 [2012-02-01 16:28:42 +0000 UTC]

THis is really well done and cool. Epic!!

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dancingtrees In reply to Lovely-Madness-13 [2012-02-01 16:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It wasn't finished when I posted the first half....

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