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DanielDGriffiths — Misfortune
Published: 2011-04-03 16:40:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 432; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description Misfortune smiles at the games
she plays with lovers' hearts
and toys with lives she built up high
and cruelly tore apart

For, on a whim, and without thought
she'll break the truest man
for no good reason it may seem
except to show she can
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Comments: 10

FreakyShadows [2011-04-11 02:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and very true.

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to FreakyShadows [2011-06-08 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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FreakyShadows In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2011-06-12 21:11:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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ShinyWish [2011-04-09 18:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to ShinyWish [2011-04-10 22:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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beautyinreview [2011-04-06 08:22:30 +0000 UTC]

This one is to the point and has a beautiful flow, especially the second stanza. Great job.

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to beautyinreview [2011-04-08 20:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much - I'm glad you liked it!

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TwistedAnger [2011-04-03 22:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and true about most

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DanielDGriffiths In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-05 00:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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TwistedAnger In reply to DanielDGriffiths [2011-04-05 00:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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