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August 27, 2003
2:10 pm

Look at her
Dark clothes
Black fingernails
But she's all smiles
So happy
You'd hardly believe
It was true
But it must be
See she is always
With these happy people
Surely she's happy too
Look she's laughin now
It's easy to blieve
Long as you don't look
Into her eyes
They tell the truth
The truth no one knows
That it is all a lie
Inside she's crying
Slowly dieing
But if you don't look there
She's happy
Perfectly normal
But inside
She needs help
But she don't know
How to ask
So she hides it all
Deep inside
Where no one will see
Cause we're all too afraid
Of what we might see
If we look inside
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Comments: 8

nbaAngel [2004-03-24 11:48:49 +0000 UTC]

that's beautiful, so true about a few people I know, u really captured the feeling, i likes

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erygothicpoet [2003-09-23 20:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, d. It has been quite a while since we have spoken, hasn't it? Well, it's nice to know that you are still writing...I'm in a bit of a dry writing spell so to speak. This peice is wonderful; it's relateable. You speak from your heart about your soul that you believe no one else around you can sense. I have the same thing, though I know that mine is sensable, for my love, Dearest Robert, knows all just by looking into my filmy eyes. We are alike. Nice job!
always,
~erygothicpoet
aka
kiyoki

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daphantom In reply to erygothicpoet [2003-09-23 21:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes it has been quite a while. Am waiting patiently until you write more and post it, love your writings.

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disturbed-angel [2003-09-23 11:58:07 +0000 UTC]

thats really nice i can really relate to what u write... there are many days i will put on a front keep up the beautiful writing

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daphantom In reply to disturbed-angel [2003-09-23 13:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankies. Putting up a front is easy for me to do, not so great at breaking it down and being myself at school. That's where I got my inspiration for this one.

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disturbed-angel In reply to daphantom [2003-09-24 10:20:54 +0000 UTC]

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school [2003-09-23 10:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Is this about a gothic chick. I know that I'm wrong on this. But it's not easy. You and I should do a collaboration poem together it would be alot of fun. Just send me a note letting me know and if you do want to then in the note back to you I'll put in my half of the poem and then you put in yours. Hope you collaborate with me. :Aww: how sweet of me. I really am a nice guy.

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daphantom In reply to school [2003-09-23 13:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Some people would say it's about a gothic girl, though I don't really consider myself to be, alot of people think I am.

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