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Published: 2012-02-28 00:54:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 3
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Red is the rose,That stings the hands of princes,
Thorns dripping with Hell's desire,
That smells of Angel's skin.
A demon is the rose,
That teases princes,
Into plucking a gift,
That's a curse,
Eve's apple reincarnate.
Mermaid tails,
With salt infused skin,
Dead seamen,
Seduced into drowning,
In the clutches of the forbidden,
Sex,
Is the appeal,
Is the need,
Is the evil,
Until you understand,
What is heaven and,
What is hell,
What is between your breast and your spine?
Do you know?-
Life will show you,
Red roses and Mermaid tails,
Princes and Seamen,
Too senseless to conquer,
Temptationβ¦,
Will you?
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Comments: 8
spelonberry [2012-04-10 22:55:41 +0000 UTC]
This is a great poem especially when so many people think that sex is good and the high point of life and doesn't have any consequences. Technically I liked it too - at first the commas were annoying but then I liked them.
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dappledgrey In reply to spelonberry [2012-04-11 02:06:43 +0000 UTC]
your dead on and thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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chazzyluvergurl [2012-03-03 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]
I like your writing. This whole poem paints so many pictures for me. My favorite part is "mermaid tails with salt-infused skin." It leaves a mystical aspect to the poem, and the part about dragging them down gives it something more sobering, a warning of sorts. Nice work.
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dappledgrey In reply to chazzyluvergurl [2012-03-05 00:11:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the comment I'm glad you like it!!
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chazzyluvergurl In reply to dappledgrey [2012-03-05 00:46:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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dappledgrey In reply to JasonDHennings [2012-02-29 01:27:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks That means alot.
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