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Published: 2006-05-14 14:42:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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concept of abandonment [link]A
Bruised
Child
Despondently
Endures
Figurative
Gashes
Haphazardly
Inside.
Jutting
Keloidal
Lacerations,
Mar
Naiveté,
Obscuring
Piqued
Qualms.
Rendered
Soulless-
Torpid
Undulating
Vulnerability
Wanes;
X-radiation
Yielding
Zilch
~~*~~
“…Trauma causes pain and the mind looks for an out lease”
-Hide And Seek quote
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Comments: 23
i saw this just now! oh my god, u;re brilliant!!! thank u!!!!!!!!!!!! *huuuuuuuuuuuugs*
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any thing but idle,indeed.
mayhaps i will syphon from your muse instead...
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lol..my juice is but nabbed from ur tankage
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that's kinda creepy, i expect a zombie child to come jumping out from behind them.
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thanks
that's what I was trying to go for as there may just be a part II to this
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i wish i can understand what u wrote down to the comment.. but there're lots of words that i don't even know the meanings..
my bad.. : (
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its basically about the emotions of one abused… how they react and lash out unknowingly and how over time they can appear hollow/empty inside:
A bruised child Sadly/miserably
Endures metaphorical gashes chaotically inside
n the form of protruding raised cuts that ruin naiveté/innocence
obscuring a sudden outburst of anger in the form of uncertainties/doubts
rendered and or made soulless vulnerability lazily rises and falls
to eventually disappear
x-radiation and or looking inside shows nothingness
no worries 
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this was an experiment , as it was written in acrostic style (usually spells a phrase or word vertically) this however was an ABC acrostic, starting with the first letter of the alphabet going a-z
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really intresting..
i didn't know anything about "acrostic style"
thanks for the information..
: )
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ur welcome anytime
i have done a few dedications using peoples names in acrostic form... i luv experimenting with different formats of poetry.
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that's great indeed..
can u write another for me?
using "pamukkale"
: )
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i will give it a try..lol.
may be a few days because of work, but i may come up with something
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doubt that lived up to what you were hoping for...maybe I will try again
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i left my quick attempt on your page... my impression of your talent and art
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this is so pretty so deep
...just like i feel now abandoned...
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thanks... sorry to hear you can relate to this
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