bon-bon [2003-01-27 01:36:15 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome!

oh yeah you probably don't know me...I'm lauren's friend.


-Bonnie

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whatsambiguous [2002-12-19 11:40:35 +0000 UTC]

this is probally gonna be my all time favorite. its short but it really gets the point across.


love ya
tj

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nostalgicstar [2002-12-09 22:03:50 +0000 UTC]

blah blah blah...


fav.

(the blahs were to the person before me)

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stupidlyinlove [2002-12-09 21:08:45 +0000 UTC]

in my above coment..i said the poem is repetitive...just to clarify..i meant that ive seen a million poems about the same thing...and you didnt distinquish this one from the others...

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stupidlyinlove [2002-12-09 21:07:34 +0000 UTC]

the second to last line doesnt flow with the poem...and the poem is kind of repetitive...i wont vote a dislike dev. bc u support understanding...however i dont like how you support understanding...you shouldnt care how others feel as long as your happy and your happiness and actions are justified...now..the poem lacked emotion and creativity...the first 4 lines were cliches...try to stay away from those...overall...its not horrible...but its definately not great

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silentpixie [2002-12-09 20:54:04 +0000 UTC]

HOLY FUCK!!! plus fave!!!!

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