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DarkPathPride — 26 February

Published: 2012-02-27 01:41:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description This is what I ended up trying to make during the stream. It will never get finished because I ran out of motive, so I'll post what I have to show I didn't just mess around today.
There isn't really anything to critique because it's unfinished, but just bash whatever you want if that's how you play.

That is SUPPOSED to be a cherry tree.
There was either gonna be a pink pond or a person sitting on a rock reading, but I couldn't do it today.
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Comments: 3

DragonAura77 [2012-02-28 02:10:28 +0000 UTC]

AW DOG THIS IS LOOKING GREAT. I watched you for about 10 minutes, but then I got lonely and left. :C
Sooooo this is unfinished and stuff, but there's one little thing I want to point out before you finish this in case you didn't notice it earlier.

The tree roots should grow underground, and here it kind of looks like it's chilling on the ground. Thin the roots out to make it appear as though the roots are growing into the earth.

YEAH, I'M THE MASTER CRITIQUE I KNOW.

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DarkPathPride In reply to DragonAura77 [2012-02-28 02:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Dude I saw you had shown up but I was eating and had put "Pause" on my screen. I'm sorry I wasn't there to keep you company! D: I was thinking that was you.

Ooh, yeah, for the first time in my life I am not ashamed to accept some advice. I seriously had no idea that tree roots thinned out before going underground. Every tree I ever looked at as a kid had big huge roots that were thicker than my arm. But this is a different kind of tree.

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DragonAura77 In reply to DarkPathPride [2012-02-28 03:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Lol, who else talks to themselves in a chatroom. ONLY ME.

I GUESS THAT'S NOT COMPLETELY WHAT I MEANT. Tree roots are pretty big, what I meant by that is they should appear as though they're growing into the ground, and thinning the roots will make it appear as though they are growing underground (the roots are still large, but the grass and earth are concealing the roots).

I HOPE I MAKE SENSE.

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