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Published: 2001-11-25 00:19:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 746; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 47
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Description A short while after I took this photo, Redcliffe City Council ran a competition looking for photographs showing "Redcliffe" or "The Spirit of Redcliffe" -- and I submitted this. It didn't win, of course (a photo of the red cliffs won...) but I still like it.

It was taken underneath Redcliffe Jetty. (It probably didn't help my cause that, six months after I took this, and after threatening to do so for the last ten years, they finally pulled the old jetty down to build a new one!)

Anyway, comments welcome! What do you think of it...

Edit: June 2004: After much deliberation, I have decided to add a border to this photograph. I have seen borders on others which seem to work really well -- but I'm not entirely sure what to do with the border here, so for the moment I've taken the advice of ~optimist ...

Also, I've decided the title should really be "beneath redcliffe jetty" rather than "old redcliffe jetty" -- but I'm never all that good with titles anyway...
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Comments: 35

beachbeats86 [2007-07-13 12:53:39 +0000 UTC]

love the redclife jetty, it was a shame they ripped it down, destroyed the history, i like it cause it had to be on film, when the jetty was there digital wasnt really big or around. i no longer live in scarbrough, but i do miss the cliff!

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nny777slavelabor [2005-12-31 02:29:43 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful! great lighting

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darkphoenix In reply to nny777slavelabor [2005-12-31 04:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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nny777slavelabor In reply to darkphoenix [2005-12-31 04:04:17 +0000 UTC]

any time

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featherwoman [2005-10-02 19:33:53 +0000 UTC]

I think this photo had to win!
The concept is really nice!

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e-Phoenix [2005-03-01 13:27:36 +0000 UTC]

beautiful picture, how comes it didnt win

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darkphoenix In reply to e-Phoenix [2005-03-01 13:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

It didn't win because the judges were a bunch of no-talnet, unimaginative hacks who wouldn't know art if it kicked 'em in the ... *ahem*

(No, I'm not bitter! )



Truthfully, I really don't think it would have suited their purposes...

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e-Phoenix In reply to darkphoenix [2005-03-01 14:16:55 +0000 UTC]

i havent tried to go into contests coz i know id be disappointed, ehh, my photos arent well developed too, so i know what my end would look like with cruel judges


slainte;
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WuLsEn [2004-06-10 01:38:13 +0000 UTC]

WOW...I love this piece...this is totally my style!

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MattSpire [2004-06-09 22:32:25 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe I never saw the original. Well, I like the title. And the border works very well, too, as there is it wraps a simple, completing square around the pinched mirrored cubic look. As a photo it's also great, I'm sure if you weren't off twenty paces thematically you would've won.

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darkphoenix In reply to MattSpire [2004-06-12 02:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Hey Matt, long time no see. (I considered asking about the name change, but common sense prevailed -- and I went 'n read your journal entry on the subject instead! )

I'm glad you like this. I'm actually planning on submitting a couple more photos in the near future -- images I've found while going through my boxes (and boxes) of prints looking for stuff to add to my stock account. I shall definitely be putting more thought into presentation from now on...

"off twenty paces thematically"

Well, I prefer to think of it as being their total lack of vision and imagination -- but maybe that's just me!

Cheers,

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MattSpire In reply to darkphoenix [2004-06-12 14:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Good! I look forward to seeing more from you.

Hah and yes, your entry was probably more involved than any of them.

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optimist [2004-06-07 12:03:14 +0000 UTC]

very cool tunnel effect here
to the border question: i would use a white border, about 100 px on each side, and a 1 px black border around the photo itself...
the colors are very strong here, i like the difference between the water and the manmade tunnel

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darkphoenix In reply to optimist [2004-06-12 02:36:04 +0000 UTC]

PS: Just thought I'd let you know I've added a border to my jetty photo pretty much according to your guidelines, if you're interested.

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optimist In reply to darkphoenix [2004-06-12 10:44:27 +0000 UTC]

i think it looksmuch better now, relly professional

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darkphoenix In reply to optimist [2004-06-13 02:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks

I agree the border does make quite a difference -- thanks for the advice!

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darkphoenix In reply to optimist [2004-06-08 04:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ... and thanks for the suggestion on a border. I shall try a few things on the weekend, see what I can come up with.

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SteavieLea [2004-05-05 11:23:51 +0000 UTC]

what an interesting photo.....and the fact it has a history. ALso you got a pic of something no longer there.....pretty awesome!

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darkphoenix In reply to SteavieLea [2004-05-13 11:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad you like it.

I guess it really is about time I got a matching photo of the new pier!

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sevendaywonder [2004-04-06 20:14:04 +0000 UTC]

what a great shot! the angle of the light coming down
did you get wet when you took this?

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darkphoenix In reply to sevendaywonder [2004-04-12 01:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

Nope, didn't get wet, I was high and dry on the beach... You have got me wondering, though: I don't know if I've been under the new jetty since it was built...

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MarkGreenmantle [2004-04-05 05:48:37 +0000 UTC]

oh man, the last time I was under that old jetty I nearly got stung by a bloody huge jelly fish with 2 meter long tentacles....

great shot!

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darkphoenix In reply to MarkGreenmantle [2004-04-06 09:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I wasn't too concerned about going under the jetty -- but I wouldn't go in the water! I've seen the jellyfish jostling for elbow room some days!

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Shunasazzee [2004-03-18 18:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is neat! I couldn't tell what exactly I was looking at at first, but I think that it adds to the picture. It's very unique! You caught some really good detail and the different hues in the ripples of water are great! Good job!

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darkphoenix In reply to Shunasazzee [2004-03-25 12:33:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it -- I was rather pleased myself with how it turned out.

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spicebunny [2004-01-27 17:17:04 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh ... feels like i am peeking through the water and saw it in a different perspective. i like this kinda fun

too bad you didnt won. it's a pretty pix

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syrus [2002-06-24 15:13:08 +0000 UTC]

gerat textures and colours... and perspective

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dr-d [2002-06-01 04:04:28 +0000 UTC]

wow, that is a great perspective shot. much of what i think of it has already been said in the other comments. Except what the hell are those people sitting on? I don't see anything between any of the other pillars.?
contest or not, that is a great idea for a photo.


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shuffle forward, eyes downcast, hands outstretched to recieve your life...

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lobsterclaws [2002-05-25 16:29:53 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore this image! The repetition of the shapes and the interesting quality to the materials makes for a great shot!

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loki669 [2002-05-04 06:13:04 +0000 UTC]

bad ass, color, perspective, yadda yadda yadda, you know what i mean
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life is what happens while we are making plans

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br0wnceus [2001-11-28 03:40:11 +0000 UTC]

great man, i really like this picture, you have some good skills for photography, keep it up.

- em.ka -

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pooka [2001-11-27 18:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. Reminds me of one of those recursive TV effects, picture within picture within picture.

That blurred post in the foreground throws off my sense of depth a bit though... I think I would have tried to keep the focus close and let the background (end of the tunnel) go a bit fuzzy instead. That's just me though... 'Tis a very cool shot!

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mastermindg [2001-11-26 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]

looks nice, too bad you didnt win. barnacles are neat

perpetuallyconfusedmastermind

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oiboi [2001-11-26 07:13:15 +0000 UTC]

I cant believe only one person has commented on this!

This is beautiful! I love the lighing and the color composition... the beautiful semetry... this is great! Excellent creative thinking!

-adrian-
Blessed are those that expect nothing.
For they will not be dissapointed.

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tzen [2001-11-25 03:59:42 +0000 UTC]

awsome! the angle and focus is amazing
did you have to get wet to pull this off? anyways.. nice stuff

-TzeN https://tzen.deviantart.com/gallery

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